1597539 Well, the story is good. I was lately checking a bunch of stories and out of this one I found this the best. Pretty much the idea is good and the story itself is good. Though I'm not a good critique so you should ask other people. :P ( By that I mean I'm being rushed right now. ;3 )
1598585 Well, thanks
1597539 Well, the story is good. I was lately checking a bunch of stories and out of this one I found this the best. Pretty much the idea is good and the story itself is good. Though I'm not a good critique so you should ask other people. :P ( By that I mean I'm being rushed right now. ;3 )
Thanks for the fave :)
So... what do you like about it?