1058267 Admittedly, I have only read the first 3 chapters, but I do like what I see. There is good set up and I do like how descriptive you are with firearms. I eagerly await to see those...things go down in a hail of dakka. One issue I do have is grammar. Nothing that slows down the story, but noticeable. Other than that, it's all good. I look forward to reading more.
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Admittedly, I have only read the first 3 chapters, but I do like what I see. There is good set up and I do like how descriptive you are with firearms. I eagerly await to see those...things go down in a hail of dakka.
One issue I do have is grammar. Nothing that slows down the story, but noticeable.
Other than that, it's all good. I look forward to reading more.
So you faved Battle of the blanks eh? What part of my story do you like?