Thanks for the watch, Jordy!

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Wow! Thank you so much! I would welcome any criticisms you have to offer.

945812 Thank You. This is a wonderful series that I have been enjoying enough to want to sign up for fimfiction. I love your quick updates and quality of writing.

I will admit that I was surprised by chapter 21 and chapter 22. The direction I was thinking did not involve Chrysalis choosing to not trust Twilight or Chrysalis showing she wants the crystal. This is not a bad thing. By adding this twist I have an increased interest in the next chapter to see what will happen next.

One thing I complement you on with upmost praise is your not shipping Twilight and Jigsaw. The way this relationship worked was wonderful. Twilight had excellent characterization and her diction was delightful. The changling General/ Jigsaw pairing is fun. Humanizing (or rather ponyizing) the changlings with the captain worked wonderfully. Incorporation of Jigsaw's javelin throwing talent, eluded to in prior chapters, did not go unnoticed.

I realize I have not provided much in the way of constructive criticism. This is because I would prefer to reread and make sure of any negative comments I have thought. When entrenched in a good story it is easy to get lost and begin to view things in a biased artificial light.

Thank you for your great work!

Sincerely,

JTG

Thanks for the fave on The Celestia Code!