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Hey Vong! Honestly I love the consistency of the storyline, and how the main character Arthur isn't a perfect "Mary sue" type character. Honestly the story stayed intriguing and held my attention all the way through with nary Any points where I skimmed through a filler paragraph! Honestly it's one of the better op displaced-ish fics I've ever read; and I've amassed hundreds of tales and stories and sagas over the years on this site. I'm honestly antsy for the next chapter lol I've done this a few times but if you ever need another editor or proofreader I would be more than willing to help.

Like I said, your story rates in probably the top 10 pseudo-op displaced-ish fics I've ever written that didn't fall into any plot holes or story jumps or inconsistencies. Probably the only thing that catches my attention was the change of the Kuma's Childs name from I believe Burst to Booster, correct me if I'm wrong it was many chapters ago lol

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I’m very happy to hear that!

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You're welcome! Honestly the story is very well written and the characters are well developed. A lot of the longer stories they just seem to stutter out, but your story has really snared my interest consistently!

Thanks for favoriting Tales of the Battle Foals!

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Excellent story! Can't wait for the next chapter!