i finished touching up the first chapter today but im not going to post it, until the second chapter is done because thats were Ponys first start to show up in the story, so if i post it now, it wont have any Ponys in it and thats no fun. Hopefully ill get the second chapter done tomorrow. it might be delayed tho, because i might want to have one of my friends read it and so i can edit it further. so it might be a little wile before i have my first story out.