So I have changed part of chapter 17 to explain the assimilation process and mind preservation process in more detail. I have changed how it works. I highly encourage readers to at least read the new passage. I have the changed passage below if you only want to read that part, or you can go back to chapter 17 and see it in context. I hope you enjoy it. Please tell me your thoughts! Thanks!

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I changed the name of the fic from "Blossomforth the Thingpone" to "BlossomThing". I thought that "Blossomforth the Thingpone did not really roll off the tongue well and BlossomThing was a better title. Do you think this is better or do you think it was better how it was? Do you think "The BlossomThing" would be a better title?

I'll be posting the next chapter tomorrow after I have the chance to do some proofreading. I think it is a good one. BTW I want to know. How are you all liking the story so far? I know I am a bit slow at making new chapters. It is an exercise of removing writer's block scene by scene. A bit hard at times but the product is satisfying.

Your comments feed me strength. FEED ME.

Good news everyone! I have just finished a new chapter and I think it may be my best one yet!

I have spent many hours writing this. Remember that I am almost a complete novice at authorship this being my first fiction ever so my rate of writing is pretty slow. However, in my opinion, the chapters seem to be improving in quality as I practice. Hooray!

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I can't post it because it is a NSFW picture but I can say that it is a scene from a future chapter.

See >>969409 in derpibooru.org to find the image.

Thank you to Pepperoach for his excellent attention to anatomical detail! It is a beautiful piece of art.

I improved chapter 4 by adding some descriptions to go along with the dialogue between Blossomforth and Cloud Chaser. It did seem to be quite bare before. Hopefully, this is an improvement.

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