I realize that a lot of writers go the route of a character falling madly in love with theirs, and they might see that happening in the most recent part of my story with Hokey Smokes. I have come here to tell you that it will not. In fact, I promise you that I will never be pairing him with any of the mane six or any canon character or... anypony. These are just the idle thoughts of a subconscious that is telling him that-

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I was thinking of making my goal, the first of many, to get 20 followers. Think I can do it?

The next part has come out.

I know there are, maybe, 10 of you that are reading this... but still!

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/26621/Elements-of-Forgiveness-part-2%3A-Magic

So I finally got around to making a new chapter for my fairly bad story. I hope that you all like it, as it is leading up to a few more stories that I hope other people will like. With any luck, this will even help my older stories get views, and maybe help me find that editor I've been searching for.

To all of you from the first story who are wondering why you've gotten this, I figured I'd let you know about it. Who knows? You might actually like it.

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What do you think? I did my best to come up with something that I could be bothered to read, and it turned out to be different than I intended when I went into it.

How do you guys like my story? I'm thinking about writing more about Hokey Smokes, fleshing him out more and more than he already is. In case you haven't noticed, he took a life of his own near the end. Now he's more than a self-insert, he isn't actually anything like me at all.

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Yet ten chapters later, it is still going.

What do you all think about it?

When I first started, I imagined that it would be a quick story that would end in a certain way. Yet here I am, six chapters in, and I have to wonder if there is an end in sight. This isn't even a bad thought in my view, it simply is. I would really love to read about your thoughts on where the story has gone and where you think it will go in the coming chapters. That will help me figure out if I've been pacing it wrong, going about my idea the wrong way, or actually did the right thing.

So, you might notice that there isn't another chapter. I should be fixing that soon-ish. Let me just get used to this keyboard that I'm going to be using to write these chapters from now on. It might take a few days, but I'll do it! Other than that, life has been busy... really busy.

I put it up, just wanted some feedback from everyone.

Alright, I have obviously started to work on it, but there is something that I hope you all could do for me before I finish it and post it. What do you think so far? What am I doing wrong? What am I doing right? I started this account, and the story, because I like writing a lot. I also like improving, which can only happen if people tell me how I can. If you can give me any advice, any at all, it would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you.