I'm pretty sure all the major grammatical errors and dropped bold/italics tags have been quashed: writing with *asterisks for bold* and _underscores for italics_ helped.

If anyone would be interested in prereading besides the Usual Gang of Puddin'Heads, drop me a PM and I'll drop you the password. Once it's preread, I'm publishing.

In the process of preparing for Chapter 6, I noticed something... out of whack in Chapter 3. Specifically, the elemental associations. I've since fixed it.

That's all. Probably should have Chapter 6 up this week.

I AM working on chapter 6 (A House, Divided) and hopefully it'll be posted much sooner than Chapter 5 was. But I also have some sillier things to do in between.

Deduction, Induction, Intuition (on Wisdom) is one of them.

The other is a rather silly crossover; I'm gathering data on it when I can.

The short version: We regret to inform our crew that the Antarans do not want to be our friends. All hooves on deck - full power to the Party Cannons.

I cannot beleive how much of a pain formatting that thing was. Let me know if I've screwed that up.

I'm off to write something else, then back to this.

Not as much as I'd feared, but I need to rewrite the ending of Chapter 5. So that will be up soon for the prereaders.

Sorry for the delay; I lost my memstick like a boss.

I'm going to be volunteering at a San Francisco convention, GaymerX2, and I'll be bringing my Chuubo's Marvelous Wish Granting Engine setting hack for MLP:FIM with me. It features headcanon, conventions, Discord, Gen 1 references, and Twilight Sparkle's Secret Shipfic Folder, so if that sounds like a good idea and you're heading to the con - I'll be the fat Dusk Shine in tabletop gaming.

Work on Chapter 5 of A World, Reflected (tentatively: "A House, Divided") is progressing. Chapter 5 is likely to be longer than the others (just so there's room for Twi to meet everyone) and that's probably going to continue going forward; this is where the story is kicking into high gear and close to the pinch in Act 2: Syd Field's term for the midpoint of a story, the moment when the protagonist stops reacting and starts acting and going on the offensive.

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Chapter 4: A Sister, Met is up and published in A World Reflected. I was deeply worried that throughout the shocking revelation scene, John Cleese would step into the middle of my fic waving his arms and shouting "Stop it, stop it, it's getting too silly!" My prereaders assured me that it worked just fine - that it was surreal instead of 'wait, what' - so now I just have to submit to the opinions of a wider audience.

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