Pretty sweet idea but, you could do something that will happen to all the mane6. A creature released by Twilight. But hey, I'm just a kid (begginer at writing) and you'rethe writer. Can't wait for the next fic.

1822 i've been thinking about a second part where the creature possesses Twilight's body and wreaks havoc. I'm still unsure, I need more time to plan it out.

Awesome fan-fic! If you could continue it, it would be awesome! Anyway keep up the good work!