Part of the people who read my story like the idea of my story and liked it. While the other part hates the story due to terrible writing and grammar.
That is why I can get me a editor to fix it.

I checked some of the comments on Man of Equestria and thought that I can start a second one today and get a proof reader tomorrow. But then I realized I have school tomorrow and I can do that on the weekend. So if it all go's well with my story I can start on another story called Alicorn X.
But that is when I can see if my second story gets me some good results or not.

the story Man of equestria is about if a human goes crash lands on equestria not superman or Kal-el from the superman universe. I wrote about if a human is raised in a alien planet in which the child gains super powers. not if the real superman is raised my ponies. sorry for the mix up and the grammar. I will work it out at the end of the month to see if It can go better. pleas forgive me if the story is confusing with the whole superman crossover. it is the idea of the whole Clark gets to

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My avatar needs to change but doesn't Change when I upload one! I try to refresh it but it stays the same! So can anyone comment on my avatar if it is still a pony instead it was supposed to be different. thank you and also my story is on hold so I can make an even better one!

I'm not sure if I can make a new chapter with my story so sorry.

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my grammar and punctuations are finally moderated and aloud to be viewed yay!

though it does suck that more then half dislikes the story though the readers are slowly liking my story now so that is also good to.
I wanted to write another chapter but I all ready did that in the morning so it's all good.
I might not make another on until Monday 19th happens so till then good luck with school and see you all later.

I don't want any hassle on this but I need a good proof reader and editor on my story and to be approved on this site so can any one please find me a proofreader and editor thank you all.

Trying to make my proof reader on my story so I won't make any new chapter to day sorry who ever reads my story till next time bye~ bye.

am I typing this right wait yeah I am.
hello every body nice writhing to you I'm starting my new story man's heaven and hell it's sure to be completed but I am not sure when I really need some comments to better it and hope some people might follow me so they see how progressive I am with my stories. my goal is a new chapter every day and also making them a lot longer to. this is Brotherhoof12 saying goodnight sleep tight.