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Awesome! I've just now revamped the formatting so that it's less of a wall of text and more of a pleasant read. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, there should be more to come!

820233 The story was very well written and I didn't catch myself switching to a different webpage every paragraph.... I know that sounds like the usual dribble, but I have difficulty concentrating on reading.... So, yeah!

Thanks for the favorite on Moonlight! Mind telling me what you think?

698165 You're very welcome!

Thank you for favoriting The Magic Factory: The Beginning!