I not sure if anyone really reads these blood posts but right now I'm looking for a temporary proof reader for my story "Rise of an Empire, Fall of Another"

I don't expect a real following for my story "Rise of an Empire, Fall of Another" but I do hope to get constructive criticisms to help improve my writing style and maybe make the characters in the latter chapters (for example the princesses and the mane 6) more believable so I can write to the best of my ability.

What if the diamond dogs we know from the show are the outcastes of their society? I often wondered what if their home country is in such dire straits (i.e. from war, dragons, famine, sickness) that they were forced to exile the mentally and physically deformed members of their homeland. where they soon ended up in equestria. I thought of doing a sort of rise of the diamond dogs story, where after centuries of bloodshed and famine they are lead into an age of industry (maybe a human I'm not

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