I have been working on Beta in Equestria for over two years now.
I realize it's not the kind of fare that is normally desired here, and for that reason this is not the completely edited version of my story. for that you'll need to goto my weasyl page https://www.weasyl.com/submissions/utakubeta?folderid=52747
But this is a story I have poured a lot of my soul into.
I hope you enjoy.

I'm ending the book sooner than I planned but I think it's where it should :)
I hope you have enjoyed Book I... yes there WILL be a Book II
I will start working on this immediately, but I may not start releasing chapters until i've had a little more vetting.
I just got finished going through the re-reedit of chapter 2 and... omfg I can see why people pissed on my story... at least on the technicals.

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SO im going to be going over 20 chapters.
I hope you don't mind my faithful readers :)
We are in the final stretch. im pretty sure it'll only be about 4 more chapters, for those who care XD
I'm going to take a chapter publishing break on book 2
with all the hate I got with this book, im going to consider how i do the next book.
My wonderful editor Chibiyoko is responsible for helping me catch and fix my mistakes.

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New chapter, and it's probably the saddest.
It took me a while to write this. TO whomever is still following this story anyway.. thank you.

this isn't a happy chapter in the end, but i'd like to think it's a good one.
I had a girlfriend once who was almost raped. She grabbed a knife from her pocket and buried it deep into her would-be attacker. He was only wounded but got the hell away from her.

I have that knife because she was so horrified that she'd stabbed the guy, she didn't want it anymore.
I did my best to console her. she washed her hands so many times in the next few days to try and wash the blood off.

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Might be a bit of a tearjerker, but happy tears I hope.
This is the completion of the Whooves' mini arc.
The sites doesnt seem to want to announce my new chapters which is kinda sad, so here you are, all 4 of my dear loyal followers :)

I removed the alternity post because it was showing up on my phone as an entire post, for the 3 of you who saw it lol.
I didn't want to spoil any new readers, if I get those still lol, and so I copied the text and will put it up later.
Please tell me how you think of the story thus far or at all. good bad or indifferent, I really do enjoy all viewpoints.