I did a bit of an overhall with my Family Relations story. Go down and check it out now. It adds about 2 thousand words and a nice addition from Rarity and Applejack's views.

So everypony knows, I won't be doing any updating to Scorched Earth until after I get a chance to go over a writers camp from EQD. That way I can get some better writing skills and stop making so many mistakes. Until then I will be doing a bunch of fun little one shot stories. Keep reading though. Also, I need to find a good editor so message me if you want the job.