So i'm putting together ideas for the next chapter for "Rarity's Divided Destiny" and a big thing that's getting me is what to call Cloak-Rarity. I selected the original name because i needed a way to distinguish the two Rarities while still making sure the readers thought of her as Rarity and no less valid or more valid than any other rarity. I didn't called her "alter-Rarity" or "original-Rarity" or "20% cooler Rarity" so as not to bias the reader. However, the name Cloak-Rarity still sucks.

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Hi everyone!

i've been working on a new fic recently and i'd like to get some opinions before i post it. The fic is about Rarity using time travel to fix a problem but ends up so horribly destroying her life that she can't bare to live in the new timeline. She ends up jumping off a bridge.

I realize the story doesn't really have a plot, it's more of the effects of a decision. Anyone want to take a shot at it and suggest improvements?

i'll pm the google docs link if interested.