(see what I did there?) Celestia came to me, and the resulting argument had unintended, painful consequences. I had done wrong...but I worked to right the wrongs.
You know, I had an idea just like this some time ago. Never got it to work out properly though. So it's great to see somebody with a similiar idea that can get it to work.
That being said, this story is awesome and I expect MOAR
Well this won't end well, two of the people Celestia love/hates (well she might not hate Twilight yet, but denial is quite the bitch slap and fury can quickly sour emotions) are coming to town, and they're going to royally fuck things up! Celestia may or may not regret banishing Twilight/Nightmare, or maybe banishing Twilight was all part of some plan to bring Luna back to goodness or whatever! Who knows, Celestia has had crazier plans before!
(seriously though, deus ex machina letters was, and always will be a horribly risky idea )
Basically I mean that I think it's up in the air as to whether of not Celestia did this while thing intentionally or if she's going to have a very Bad summer sun Celebration.
As for the letter thing, I was making a joke about how desperate a move that must have been for Celestia to make, that is and never will be a smart move.
Ah dunno either? Ah'm just as confused as ya'll are? Ah can't really see where ya're goin' wit all tha' about Celestia bein' desperate. Sorry. Also, this was somewhat difficult to type out.
Indeed. I am working on the next chapter as we speak.
Edit: I need to quit replying impulsively to these comments. I weighed it in my mind and threw out the current idea. So, I'm still working on it. I'll find a way to put in that clop, and maybe it'll actually fit.
The concept seems based on some out of character qualities and doesn't seem to flow well. It feels as if the author just wants to get to the next event and skips out on some detail and world building. I have also noticed places where a sentence is both in first and third person perspectives.
I'm so pissed at Tia. I honestly can't wait to see what happens next chapter, although I hope nothing bad happens to the Mane 6, as it were. Hopefully Twilight gets them as friends again and they can eventually B*** smack the hell out of Celestia until she bleeds rainbows.
Twilights descriptions of herself are unrealistic."It looked stunning on me" and "the armor looked good on me".Unless they are incredibly vane people don't describe themselves like that.It would if been fitting in third person but not first.Other then that i still like the story.
just cause she's a nightmare doesn't mean she can't have feelings. really, who thought of that?
2481031
Why thank you ^-^
This idea would NOT leave my mind while I wrote the other story, and it drove me to distraction. so I decided to write it out.
You know, I had an idea just like this some time ago. Never got it to work out properly though.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
So it's great to see somebody with a similiar idea that can get it to work.
That being said, this story is awesome and I expect MOAR![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
2481153
Nope. That was just a convenient excuse to send Twi to the moon. I did a good job cloaking the true point of the fic?
2481428
Glad you think so, and I'll put at least three more chapters on here without switching up.
Well this won't end well, two of the people Celestia love/hates (well she might not hate Twilight yet, but denial is quite the bitch slap and fury can quickly sour emotions) are coming to town, and they're going to royally fuck things up! Celestia may or may not regret banishing Twilight/Nightmare, or maybe banishing Twilight was all part of some plan to bring Luna back to goodness or whatever! Who knows, Celestia has had crazier plans before!
(seriously though, deus ex machina letters was, and always will be a horribly risky idea
)
2481820
Just curious what you mean by all that. Are you saying you like it, or you don't?
2481900
Basically I mean that I think it's up in the air as to whether of not Celestia did this while thing intentionally or if she's going to have a very Bad summer sun Celebration.
As for the letter thing, I was making a joke about how desperate a move that must have been for Celestia to make, that is and never will be a smart move.
2481579
i can almost see why you did that...but seriously.
wtf. did i. just watch. LOL![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
2481976
Ah dunno either?
Ah'm just as confused as ya'll are? Ah can't really see where ya're goin' wit all tha' about Celestia bein' desperate. Sorry. Also, this was somewhat difficult to type out.
i want moar
2482043
Indeed. I am working on the next chapter as we speak.
Edit: I need to quit replying impulsively to these comments. I weighed it in my mind and threw out the current idea. So, I'm still working on it. I'll find a way to put in that clop, and maybe it'll actually fit.
2482062 well i hope you update soon. im always watching from the shadows.
Shade out
2482108
yep, i'm working on it.
2482110 Im always wathcing and waiting![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
2482186
yay, creepy stalker fan?![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Erm...What exactly happened between nearly getting sex and dethroning and vengeance and all that?
2482981 Celestia raped Twilight in a moment of lust.![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
2483387
Okay, so what exactly happened between nearly getting raped and bloody vengeance coupled with a complete government overthrow and all that?
The concept seems based on some out of character qualities and doesn't seem to flow well. It feels as if the author just wants to get to the next event and skips out on some detail and world building. I have also noticed places where a sentence is both in first and third person perspectives.
All craftsponyship is of the highest quality.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
shit is going to get real at first I thought Luna just never exsted and moon got purified and was put under twi care but this is much mor boss
I'm so pissed at Tia. I honestly can't wait to see what happens next chapter, although I hope nothing bad happens to the Mane 6, as it were. Hopefully Twilight gets them as friends again and they can eventually B*** smack the hell out of Celestia until she bleeds rainbows.
Twilights descriptions of herself are unrealistic."It looked stunning on me" and "the armor looked good on me".Unless they are incredibly vane people don't describe themselves like that.It would if been fitting in third person but not first.Other then that i still like the story.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)