Between Phase and Planning
written by Davesknd
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It was very decent, even if there are several mistakes: 'hoofs' instead of 'hooves' and 'vane' instead of 'vain'
I loved Diamond Shadow's 'talking about feelings' part, seemed very like her. And now I want to know more about what they're like outside the bedroom.
2372557 I'm glad at least someone enjoyed it. I didn't send it to my beta reader, since I don't know if he is ready to correct clop, so mistakes may happen.
As for how they are outside the bedroom: just wait for the next "Planning of".
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Oh I am, believe me.