Where has this been all my life?

Oh Faust yes!

Refer to the line said during this video's drop for my opinion on this story

Second watersports fic i've seen recently...
To each their own I guess

Will read tommorow

The lack of 'fim:watersports' is too damn high.

Keep up the good job matey.

I'm.... Well I'm not sure what to say on this one. It's certainly new... Well, I shall continue reading...

Not a fan of these kind of fics personally, but I'll be looking forward to the third part...

Kinky.I LOVE IT!! can't wait for next chapter :)

A third chapter you must make, I am unsure of how much I can take!

Intresting...u have me hooked

Zecora groans and bits her lower lip

I trust you see the error there, that's the only thing I saw, though.

For some reason I can't help but laugh because of this. (Please don't take that to mean there is something wrong.) I just did.

And then I peed.

Actually, that was why I laughed. Those two lines were so unexpectedly straightforward.

Have an adorable pouty Rarity as a gift.

“So…” you rub the back of your head while she steps down from the box. “Do we finally have a cure for the pox?”

It sounds like Zecora wrote this part.

2312652 great rhyme!

Kk, google translate told me mungu wa kike means "the goddess" and bora zadi means "better zadi". Nice touch of Swahili in there