yes indeed, your story is simply....wonderfull, you have my vote and Please continue. Also maybe you can gag Vinyl some more in the next chapters (say with that elecrtical tape?)
Fantastic. The sheer amount of detail you put into every action and reactio would put a lot of writers to shame. Keep going with this! How about a chapter where the roles are reversed and Vinyl gets to be the master for a night?
I was actually already trying to think of a way to work Octavia into this somewhere. It won't be for a while, though. (And I definitely agree about her being a sexy dom.)
2309026 thanks, and i totally agree...a quite Vinyl and all hahaha
btw. you talked about the oneshot of Royal, i happened to like that on also very much, and i got one of my requests written by him, it was called "menage"
Have you seen how, when there aren't any up or downvotes, the counter is fully red?
Well, it has been righted now.
yes indeed, your story is simply....wonderfull, you have my vote and Please continue. Also maybe you can gag Vinyl some more in the next chapters (say with that elecrtical tape?)
Fantastic. The sheer amount of detail you put into every action and reactio would put a lot of writers to shame. Keep going with this! How about a chapter where the roles are reversed and Vinyl gets to be the master for a night?
This starts really well and shows a lot more promise. Future chapters are definitely necessary.
That was beautiful. More please, master!
'BDSM/consensual' is redundant. If it's not consensual, it's not BDSM.
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I'm aware, and fully agree. I just wanted to clarify right up front that potential readers aren't letting themselves in for some kind of rapefic .
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Thank you very much, and that's probably going to happen at some point.
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You shall have more, my friend.
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Thanks . Not that I'm too concerned with the votes for clop; some people will downvote solely on principle.
Vinyl is best pony for BDSM, no questions asked, and it's great to see that there are actually fics of her and Neon out there.
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Which is kind of funny, since Vinyl and Octavia are my OTP by far. I just decided I could have more fun writing this between Vinyl and Neon instead.
2307712 Ditto. Nothing wrong with BDSM, nothing at all.
(But dayum, Tavi would make one sexy dom.)
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I was actually already trying to think of a way to work Octavia into this somewhere. It won't be for a while, though. (And I definitely agree about her being a sexy dom.)
2307733 Either way, I'm looking forward for more of this fic.
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Thank you, and I'm sure I can manage that. A gagged Vinyl is a good Vinyl, in my opinion .
2309026 thanks, and i totally agree...a quite Vinyl and all hahaha
btw. you talked about the oneshot of Royal, i happened to like that on also very much, and i got one of my requests written by him, it was called "menage"
Damn it my pants aren't fully recovered from the last thing I read... now I have to read it later