Her long, slender arms were left bare, the creamy pale tone offsetting the brilliant hue of the fabric. From the tops of her breasts to the very tips of her fingers, Rarity’s arms and shoulders had been left bare. Nothing would interfere with her playing, giving her complete range of motion with absolutely no restriction. Slowly, she closed her eyes, lifted her head to the rafters, and played the first few notes.
Oh. My. Gosh. I dare say one of the best chapters ever...came across this with fleeting interest and I simply must say I'm hooked and cannot wait for the next installment
I have to agree with Path_Finder; there are few stories on this site that actually capture my interest. There are fewer, still, that manage to hold onto it for an indefinite amount of time. This, you will be pleased to know, is one of the fewer stories. It's not too raunchy (briefly, but so far the only part), the story is written in a very mature (grown up, not dirty) fashion, it's enthralling, riveting, and captivating. I love the description of Octavia's performance and how Rarity runs her day-to-day life with Sweetie living with her. All in all, this is a really good story, one that I will be repeatedly checking for updates!
Incredible chapter and I love how quickly this is updating. You've struck gold again Loyal, the description of the performance.......I can't find words. I feel inspired just by reading about it. Well done man. If I may be so bold as to ask "please more"? On the edge of my seat til the next update.
Easily turning into one of my favorite stories :D I'm still more in love with Archmage, but it's barely ahead of this. As Tarox said, you've definitely struck gold here, buddy!
Lambs sake! I've not read a story this daunting in such a long time , when a story paints such a vivid image, and brings tears to the readers eyes, it's such a pleasing and enjoyable expierence. (proud brony, not afraid to say he was crying happily to this) such tact with the development and yet you still hold true to the actual character, it's by far an amazing feat. I whole heartedly will be waiting for the next installment . (dosnt want to bring up the minor "HE'S" where it should have been SHE, but ... Meh)
I'm definitely enjoying this tale, but it could use another read-through or two to catch little typos and grammar slip-ups. A good number of it's when its is appropriate, that sort of thing. Minor stuff, but distracting, and the core-writing is lovely, deserving cleaner trappings. ;) Good pacing, good work establishing Rarity's character. I'd love to see more sensory imagery in your writing, tactile especially with Rarity dealing with all these fabrics, etc. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the rest of it!
Her long, slender arms were left bare, the creamy pale tone offsetting the brilliant hue of the fabric. From the tops of her breasts to the very tips of her fingers, Rarity’s arms and shoulders had been left bare. Nothing would interfere with her playing, giving her complete range of motion with absolutely no restriction. Slowly, she closed her eyes, lifted her head to the rafters, and played the first few notes.
should be Octavia there.
story is awesome as always
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Thanks for that. Changed.
oh that's awesome as ThePonyBlues allready said !
can't wait for the next chapter !
Oh. My. Gosh. I dare say one of the best chapters ever...came across this with fleeting interest and I simply must say I'm hooked and cannot wait for the next installment
Commence read.
The silent assault.
Good for Rarity.
I have to agree with Path_Finder; there are few stories on this site that actually capture my interest. There are fewer, still, that manage to hold onto it for an indefinite amount of time. This, you will be pleased to know, is one of the fewer stories. It's not too raunchy (briefly, but so far the only part), the story is written in a very mature (grown up, not dirty) fashion, it's enthralling, riveting, and captivating. I love the description of Octavia's performance and how Rarity runs her day-to-day life with Sweetie living with her. All in all, this is a really good story, one that I will be repeatedly checking for updates!
Incredible chapter and I love how quickly this is updating. You've struck gold again Loyal, the description of the performance.......I can't find words. I feel inspired just by reading about it. Well done man. If I may be so bold as to ask "please more"? On the edge of my seat til the next update.
You actually brought me to tears. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
Well done.
Easily turning into one of my favorite stories :D I'm still more in love with Archmage, but it's barely ahead of this. As Tarox said, you've definitely struck gold here, buddy!
Lambs sake! I've not read a story this daunting in such a long time , when a story paints such a vivid image, and brings tears to the readers eyes, it's such a pleasing and enjoyable expierence. (proud brony, not afraid to say he was crying happily to this) such tact with the development and yet you still hold true to the actual character, it's by far an amazing feat. I whole heartedly will be waiting for the next installment . (dosnt want to bring up the minor "HE'S" where it should have been SHE, but ... Meh)
I was sent here by equestria after dark blog. I really liked your writing style. I hope to read a lot more of your stories!
I'm definitely enjoying this tale, but it could use another read-through or two to catch little typos and grammar slip-ups. A good number of it's when its is appropriate, that sort of thing. Minor stuff, but distracting, and the core-writing is lovely, deserving cleaner trappings. ;) Good pacing, good work establishing Rarity's character. I'd love to see more sensory imagery in your writing, tactile especially with Rarity dealing with all these fabrics, etc. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with the rest of it!
I bet that the person that Rarity was with before was Dash or Applejack.
Beautifully written. Figures you wrote it years ago.