hmm seems interesting and holy shit! 13k words for chapter one... ill follow this

>>MarooIllustrator Yeah I was surprise myself when I finish it off. I wouldn't be surprised if the next one has more or less, anyway thanks for the fave. Hows the story anyway?

...Not going to lie, this seems rather rough. And rushed. And cliche, but what isn't by now?
Anyways, I'm interested in seeing where this goes, but there's a few errors here and there that a editor or proofreader could help you with.
Tracking for now, I'll save my thumb for next chapter.

>>KitsuneNoYomeiri At least you're being honest with your answer, thanks for the feedback.
The Rush part I get because I didn't plan the whole thing before typing it up on word and yeah, a total dumbass move I did there. Fuck.
But can you point out the rough and cliche parts please, I'm kinda lost with those and I'll be fixing up any errors i left unscathed.

And don't worry, the second chapter is being planned out so hopefully everything should be fine, no promises.
But I can promise you that you'll find at some point at the beginning of it... To be interesting or entertaining. But what would I know of the outcome of it when people read it? It probably won't be any of those things, so I'll just have to wait and see.

Story's pretty interesting, few rough patches here and there but that's usual for a first chapter, I suggest you get someone to check it beforehand. Very curious as to what their history is and more curious about the other two. You got a follower from me.

>>Mekapix Glad you like it and don't worry, you'll be seeing the other two real soon.

As to what their history is... Well, we'll all gonna have to wait for that unfortunately, now won't we? Anyway, tell me what do you think about the first two humans, what are they like, their personalities? And what do you like about this?

darksiders lol war and death

dude........when's a new chapter.......seriously......forgot this story

>>Anon1 No I haven't forgotten it..... It's just that down here it's pretty FUCKING cold right now! It's pissing rain over here with lightning and big loud thunders in the north island this morning. And the temperature for tonight: -6 degrees.

2641714 I am trying out this other story that I have seen.

Let's see how it goes :).