A few days ago, Twilight Sparkle was faced with her destiny. Her destiny being the power hungry soul of a forgotten princess. Now trapped in her own body, Twilight desperately searches for a way to alert her friends and escape the power of a princess.
(My first mlp story. As such I would appreciate your help and criticism. Also the current cover image is a placeholder until I can finish the real one.)
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wow...
... Kinda saw that one coming.
It feels a little rushed, the whole story I mean. Major plot points just kinda fly by. I think the premise is interesting but a little unlikely. However by no means should you stop. We readers can wait, longer chapters are your friend. If you don't have access to a computer try just writing by hand untill you can transfer whatever you've written from the page to the screen.
also
I think you meant "got"
I think it would be better if mystica had only more subtle control of celestia since i dont think a mystia controlled celestia would be as the celestia in the show and mystia doesnt lock like the "wait patiently for 1000 years while acting nice" kind
Umm... So is this dead?