so....my enemy has tried to corrupt best pony? -draws plasma swords and lightsabers and dons my magic-proof armor- it is a fight to the death -appears behind MOLESTIA and murders her- I WIIIIIIN
You use plasma swords and lightsabers on a Goddess who raises the sun? Nah, that won't get you anywhere. Go First Age Equipment. For when you have to kill something ancient and powerful, use First Age Equipment.
For the actual story.... Interesting. This is going to be one of the more... Interesting experiences in Twilight's life. Particularly if her friends decide to do a surprise visit, which is just like them.
would be a better written story if you replaced the word "pussy" with something else. Also while you did a good job not going overboard with the sex scene it would be nice if you would write more about what is going on in Twilight's head. describe more of what she is thinking and feeling on an intellectual and emotional level.
other than that it was an "ok" story. not great not bad just ok.
well...i kind of expexted that from...trollestia...
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I don't know seemed more like Molestia training her student
so....my enemy has tried to corrupt best pony?
-draws plasma swords and lightsabers and dons my magic-proof armor-
it is a fight to the death -appears behind MOLESTIA and murders her-
I WIIIIIIN
You use plasma swords and lightsabers on a Goddess who raises the sun? Nah, that won't get you anywhere. Go First Age Equipment. For when you have to kill something ancient and powerful, use First Age Equipment.
For the actual story.... Interesting. This is going to be one of the more... Interesting experiences in Twilight's life. Particularly if her friends decide to do a surprise visit, which is just like them.
i wasn't expecting that pairing.
now we need straight clop in this story.
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Its going to be a balance of Female x Female and Female x Male scenes
Fixed some minor spelling errors in this chapter.
would be a better written story if you replaced the word "pussy" with something else.
Also while you did a good job not going overboard with the sex scene it would be nice if you would write more about what is going on in Twilight's head. describe more of what she is thinking and feeling on an intellectual and emotional level.
other than that it was an "ok" story. not great not bad just ok.
I was so happy when I found this pairing!
oh dear...that pairing...I approve...and request more...
215652 love hole perhaps...