3003807 The 'You' of chapter 0 is YOU. I made it non-gender specific. Imagine that the character Orion is simply talking to you, telling you his story.
Hey, just wanted to say great intro. I like stories that mix shitty situations with something good for a change. I don't live in the best of areas either, so I know what that's like.
I think vinyl could've/ should've said something along the lines of "hey, it's your first day, no time for lookin' at my flank now, we got work to do!" Making fun of him and then saying "well it is sexy..." Lol idk, I'm writing at 12:30 in the morning.
Dude, I'm so excited to read this. It's been a minute or two since something good rolled out of fimfic. I was starting to get bored. Don't disappoint, yea?
3008842 The magic is not in the destination, but in the journey. We'll all die, eventually. The greatness comes from what you do between being born and dying.
3008978 Just pointing out an observation. Although you are absolutely correct about the journey being more important than the destination. Still only those who "live" must "DIE"!
Oh dear Jepus this is so adorable!!! I love cats, I love them a lot, and the fact how close Orion and Umbra are, is just... oh man I'm almost crying now.
Aha! I knew there was something about a cat when I heard the protagonist was called Orion... Though it could be just a coincidence. Nice story! I'll keep tracking.
3003807 The 'You' of chapter 0 is YOU. I made it non-gender specific. Imagine that the character Orion is simply talking to you, telling you his story.
man what's with all the stories being posted today that have cover images of jj's work?....
Stop checking her out... or at least wait for permission!!
And HA!! Getting told off by your pet!!
Hey, just wanted to say great intro. I like stories that mix shitty situations with something good for a change. I don't live in the best of areas either, so I know what that's like.
I think vinyl could've/ should've said something along the lines of "hey, it's your first day, no time for lookin' at my flank now, we got work to do!" Making fun of him and then saying "well it is sexy..." Lol idk, I'm writing at 12:30 in the morning.
Keep it up, you're doin' fine. yay!
Wow. This is a fun read. xD
My one regret: I don't get to preview the whole story D: Just the one chapter.
Dude, I'm so excited to read this.
It's been a minute or two since something good rolled out of fimfic.
I was starting to get bored.
Don't disappoint, yea?
I'm contemplating if i should read this, Maybe when it's finished.
NO, no I will not have to "wait and see"! You already wrote that part, in Chapter 0: Past is Prologue (Tycho).
3008842 The magic is not in the destination, but in the journey. We'll all die, eventually. The greatness comes from what you do between being born and dying.
3008978
Just pointing out an observation.
Although you are absolutely correct about the journey being more important than the destination.
Still only those who "live" must "DIE"!
Oh dear Jepus this is so adorable!!!
I love cats, I love them a lot, and the fact how close Orion and Umbra are, is just... oh man I'm almost crying now.
This is definitely going to be an awesome read.
Another wonderful start to a wonderful adventure. Can't wait to see where we go with Vinyl. Her character is just so fun!
Great start, I can tell this is going to be another good one. Orion seems like a good character and I love any kind of Vinyl shipping.
Aha! I knew there was something about a cat when I heard the protagonist was called Orion... Though it could be just a coincidence. Nice story! I'll keep tracking.