Sweet chapter man! I really like it when the reality of a situation hits a character in a story, and you did it fantasically here. I'm waiting to see if Mr. Foster and DJ Skully are introduced Those two are so badass. And I think the delay was well worth the outcome.
Ok this chapter looks pretty good although the only part that seemed to get me the most upset was when Victor dies. Now don't get me wrong I found this to be a really surprising twist although I also found it to be a sort of double-edged sword twist as well cause in my opinion you killed Victor off at the worst possible timing for me. I mean he was in all five chapters so I got the mindset of him possibly making it to the end then this chapter happens and I'm here with a dumbstruck look on my face wondering what just happened. But it still took me by surprise and I'll give you points for that, but I just hated this twist with a burning passion. Although you had your reasons and it was a good way to introduce death to the Mane 6 so I won't attack your decisions of how the plot of the story goes. Otherwise the story is interesting and I plan to read more. Cheers.
516265 Is there a chance Doctor Dave(Medic Steam punk Dlc) will appear? I just know its personality sounds like a funny, clumsy guy for confounding both the clones and the living as patients or enemies.
521182 Well, I have no idea what Double Feature is, so no. Powers' biography from Killing Floor states that he "collects the freak's fingers", so I rolled with it.
It's ok that Twilight stopped that buckshot, but i don't want to see her shield being invincible to guns. EX: It requires an Anti-Tank Rifle to break through, it requires hours of constant gunfire to break, etc...
Achievement Get: Booooooomer!!! 20 Achievement Points: Get covered in bloat bile.
Sweet chapter man! I really like it when the reality of a situation hits a character in a story, and you did it fantasically here. I'm waiting to see if Mr. Foster and DJ Skully are introduced Those two are so badass. And I think the delay was well worth the outcome.
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pffft, good one.
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We'll see...
514195 Achievement Get: [Apply Directly to Forehead] 5 Achievement Points: Choose to use intimidation to save someone.
You have no idea how much I love you for this chapter my friend.
Its glorious! Specially 'Powers' I like the personality u give him. but is there a chance he can go soft even if his family was murdered.
Now I feel like playing more killing floor. Allons-Y!
Ok this chapter looks pretty good although the only part that seemed to get me the most upset was when Victor dies. Now don't get me wrong I found this to be a really surprising twist although I also found it to be a sort of double-edged sword twist as well cause in my opinion you killed Victor off at the worst possible timing for me. I mean he was in all five chapters so I got the mindset of him possibly making it to the end then this chapter happens and I'm here with a dumbstruck look on my face wondering what just happened. But it still took me by surprise and I'll give you points for that, but I just hated this twist with a burning passion. Although you had your reasons and it was a good way to introduce death to the Mane 6 so I won't attack your decisions of how the plot of the story goes. Otherwise the story is interesting and I plan to read more. Cheers.
Great stuff! Good to see an update on this
Well shit, so much for Victor.
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Yeah, I saw Powers' bio, and I decided to go nuts with giving him such a personality. Good to know I got someone else playing Killing Floor c:
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I have the biggest grin on my face right now, you have no idea. Still good to see that you're still willing to read on.
515033
Here's hoping I can put out the next chapter in a much quicker manner than this took.
516002
Indeed. And it's only going to get crazier from here.
516265 Is there a chance Doctor Dave(Medic Steam punk Dlc) will appear? I just know its personality sounds like a funny, clumsy guy for confounding both the clones and the living as patients or enemies.
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Nothing is certain, I'll leave it at that.
Powers cutting off fingers? That wouldn't happen to be a Double Feature reference would it?
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Well, I have no idea what Double Feature is, so no. Powers' biography from Killing Floor states that he "collects the freak's fingers", so I rolled with it.
JUST READING THIS IT GIVES ME ADRENALINE!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*CRASH*
Ouch
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heh, glad to see you're so enthusiastic about my story
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You can add another one to that list. I'ma download it tomorrow, if I have the time.
Also, great chapter!
Lieutenant mother fucking Masterson reporting for duty, just the way i like it
It's ok that Twilight stopped that buckshot, but i don't want to see her shield being invincible to guns.
EX: It requires an Anti-Tank Rifle to break through, it requires hours of constant gunfire to break, etc...