I have no idea how to respond to this one. A few spelling errors here and there. The idea itself, all I can say is "Wow"

What am I looking at? *stares at a wall for the next few hours*
Edit: no really. What did I just bear witness to? I think I need sleep. I'll figure out what I tried to read in the morning.

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What the fuck...

umm do you need help with your insanity?

I don't know what all the fuss us about, I liked it.

So whats the weather like in your padded room.
Also good story.

Decent for a one shot, and it dose give one ideas....hm....plenty of ideas. well done on this fic.

I thought someone might do a romance fic between them once i saw that pic on DA. xD

well i like slennder colt.... ok you win i will read it

Okay...I think some ponies in this comment box are in awe.
And I know others will be,which is cool.

Your story on the other hands is not bad.I don't love it but like it.

It was a bit a rush,but what do I care its your story do whatever you want.

Well this isn't something you read everyday, well done, but as others have said it was a bit fast. Then again it is a clip fic so I'm okay with it however I'm now interested in a romance between these two.

that was rather unique just didn think you would start a story with sex related items so probly shouldn have read it at school like 8 hours ago but good story line and errors every once in a while but nothing you cant actually get the right word for

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A+ for the idea, but only a D for the execution. The plot is rushed, and making the story about Slender was pretty pointless because you didn't really make use of his unique nature (not talking about the sex, but his speech pattern, appearance, etc.).

whaaat? umm im just eat a burrito to handle this,

and sacrifice a rooster to Luna,

to keep me safe...

I look forward to the spawn of celestia and slendermane

I like slender colt
P.S. Maybe you can read my story, "My Day In Ponyville"

OMC ,slenderman and celestia? not possible

Looks like somepony will give birth to a slenderpony

2150578 I think he has it figured out

Meh, not bad

yes nice deserves a like

I love how neither of them ever mentioned his victims