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I can not correct any gramar error, I can say that is an interesting concept and funny.
and even if has no positive feedback, finish it, its always a good learning experience
Pretty interesting and funny.
Moar.
upvoted&&faved
This...IS...
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Amusing concept, princest is always fun.
Keep up the good work!
For some reason this sprang to mind instantly just from the description.
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This is well written and funny as hell.
Please keep going.
First off, nice job! This is pretty well written! I like it so far. Also, please tell me this is actually a Princest/TwiDash fic and not just wishful thinking on my part!! I will love you forever. That being said, more! Please
Yeah irishtiger it is
That makes me very happy. Can't wait to read more
Cool
This story is good so far. Personally I hope when it gets to the more interesting parts you avoid them using strap-ons.
Woah 'Joe that caught me off guard. No I wouldn't pollute my story like that, and transformation magic makes more sense anyway. If I wanted to go there I mean.
The only question I have is this. is there twidash in this story?
That was answered earlier but there will be when I write it. Any time to write ha eluded me so far and I do apologise.
Holy shit this is great! I don't normally read clop involving the princesses but this just stood out to me. 10/10 keep going!
The story has a interesting concept that could lead to a lot of fun and embarrassing situations, keep writhing..
interesting, and comical. i love a good clopfic every now and then. i think you should finish it.
This makes me laugh, and amuses Commander Conflict.
It...also apperently confuses Luna.
WE DEMAND AN EXPLAINATION.
Y U NO UPDATE?
I did post a blog update a lil' while ago about that. I'm about 2/3'rds through so I'm going to set a goal to have it done within the week. Look forward to it
Heheh, Twidash and possible Princest?
...Carry on.
Oh the awkward feels of it all! Awesome stuff so far, and that bit at the end, priceless
"I'm coming Rainbow!" 
I can has more pwease?
Good news people chapter 3 is planned and its title is "Start slow"
Luna not knowing about the details behind the birds and the bees is kind of silly. She's over a thousand years old, and even if you decide that she's spent very little time not on the moon she's still at least an adult.
It's just the solo stuff she doesn't know. It's not like she's completely ignorant. It makes enough sense
never would have thought of twidash...very interesting
That is all
Only one more chapter?
Well, I'm enjoying your writing and these ships, I very much hope you would consider doing spinoffs for one or both of the pairings, maybe some longer romantic fics or clopfics. 
Haha well I wouldn't want to disappoint you. I'm just not sure where I should go with it next. Maybe i'll hit some inspiration so it can keep going, just have to wait and see.
2 seconds later: I have an idea!!!
Has Luna, is great story!
Nice writing, interesting idea for the plot. Keep it up, I look forward to seeing more.
Luna not knowing anything about clopping, or if you want to get technical, masturbation is a bit unlikely, given her age. It is also funny and I've always had a liking for the innocent Lunas. Innocent Celestias, too. They are waaay too amusing not to like them.
When are you going to make the new chapter? Its really awesome story
2633314 I said in the blog post that its already planned and should be done before the end of next month
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This has come up a bit, it is stated in the story (I think...), that "times have changed in the last 1000 years. However I'll also remind you that in the episode "Luna Eclipsed" Luna doesn't even know the definition of Fun!
It's nice to see that you came out with another chapter as I wanted to see where you were going with this story. It was not disappointing
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Darn I was going for disapointing!
Haha seriously though you win first comment after the new chapter which is really just an exuse for me to ramble some more.
Nice to know I have some people left still reading.
I liked this.
Seemed a bit stiff and jerky, with grammar errors all over the place. The dialogue was generic as it was unreal. I like the idea and it's clear that you're trying, but try to get a beta reader to look it over before you post anything else.
(Written on a phone, sorry for sounding overly harsh)
Nice to see this again! Few grammatical problems I noticed but still a fun story to read!
2916408 PLease PLease Please let the Twi Dash be A passive Friends with benefits.
2916832 I disagree, but you know what? I do want to see a foursome...
squee
MORE PLEASE!!!
