wut wut?

2117827 What?

2117858
?

2118509 Why are you saying what?

2118526
what?

2119838 If you aren't going to say anything about the fic, then leave.

2120129
ok

Unitologists are everywhere
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it's to be expected

2122214 Everywhere around a Marker? Of course.

Ah Unitology. I actually learned how to read and write their "Language".

2123255 Same.

2123701 fun, isn't it?
dl.dropbox.com/u/95402669/william%20writing%20120912.jpg

2124162 "Your jouney ends here human but begins elswhere"

Misspelled journey and elsewhere.

2124211 hmm, thought I spelled it right

2124368 Nope.

Of all the things in this here prologue that I didn't exactly like, one thing stands out.

Of all the contrived plot devices you could have picked, loading his gun up with blanks is just about the most unbelievable horseshit excuse. That just wouldn't happen.

Also, you need to work a little more on your military radio chatter.