I know the canon problem. Every time I sit to write, the back of my mind chimes what will I change today. I read Fo:E in the period of a weekend a little over a year ago. It's fuzzy at best. Luckily I've got three excellent friends who know the story well enough to give me a general idea.
For the raider/slaver distinction, I wasn't really sure what they were at the time, and I think the scared townsfolk would let their imagination get the best of them an imagine many terrible 'ends'. Thus was born the raider/slavers being, you know, either one.
If you wouldn't mind please elaborating on why the end of the chapter is far-fetched I'd really appreciate it. I'm not very good at writing hard-core stories.
Thank you for your encouragement and for keeping with me so far.
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I know the canon problem. Every time I sit to write, the back of my mind chimes what will I change today. I read Fo:E in the period of a weekend a little over a year ago. It's fuzzy at best. Luckily I've got three excellent friends who know the story well enough to give me a general idea.
For the raider/slaver distinction, I wasn't really sure what they were at the time, and I think the scared townsfolk would let their imagination get the best of them an imagine many terrible 'ends'. Thus was born the raider/slavers being, you know, either one.
If you wouldn't mind please elaborating on why the end of the chapter is far-fetched I'd really appreciate it. I'm not very good at writing hard-core stories.
Thank you for your encouragement and for keeping with me so far.