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Vinyl Scratch: Nightmare Hunter

Nightmares, the demonic twisted forms of everything that has died. They steal, kill, and more. Vinyl is here to stop them.

Coauthored by Lonepone http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Lonepone

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Shadow_Wing

Shadow_Wing #1 · May 13th, 2013 · · · Just Another Day ·

That was pretty damn good man! I'm glad I decided to read it. Guess I have to add your dragon Blu to the gang.

Lonepone

Lonepone #2 · May 22nd, 2013 · · · Just Another Day ·

It's not bad. You have a promising premise, but there a lot of things that need work. The plot seems to be rushed, and there's a few grammatical errors. I'm not saying that in a bad way, as I'm guessing this is your first time. When I finished my first story, it was just like this. My advice would be to pick up a co-author (hopefully me?).

I love the idea you got in this story, and I really believe you can do a lot with it. I hope you continue writing, because I want to see what you do with this.

War Muffin

War Muffin #3 · May 25th, 2013 · · · Just Another Day ·

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I would be fine with a co-author, but I'm quit difficult to work with, I don't have an internet connection at home, have already planned many, many characters and if you really wanted to we would rarely be able to work together. But if you really want to be a co-author I'm fine with it.

As for continuing I have a lot done on chapter 2, just not enough.

War Muffin