A nervous young stallion decides to take a shot at the new ruler of Equestia... and she accepts
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Just minding my own buisness when suddenly BAM!
MATURE rating all over the place. Not that I mind this was very touching and well written
I honestly cannot think of any other word to describe this but awesome!
Wait, this is only one of the endings? Shiiiiet..
Luna out of nowhere WTF???
I love it when everything turns out ... mature :D
And then there was clopping, so much clopping...
Damn story of anyone's life.
Gets laid
Involuntary one night stand.
Bahahaha, everything turns out mature. I thought what you meant by "romantic" would be something like them spending their days on the moon together or something...
But dang, surprise surprise, things got wild.
I am now bracing myself for the trolololol ending. Oh god.
I guess Nightmare Moon can't take a good romping, or unicorn semen doubles as a spell negation substance. Was really not expecting that ending to jump out like that.
160789 "unicorn semen doubles as a spell negation substance"?
Sounds legit...
ALL OF A SUDDEN:
SEX.
I just realized they "got it on" on the first date.
(First Ending)
"I want to use your mane," he says...
WTF?!
“I want to use your mane.”
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"The End"
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This really fits rather nicely into what just happened
Well written, but like MuzzledElk, I was like at the ending.
YES !!!
FUCKING AWSOME !
Also:
SEX !
Haha, do I even need to read the other endings? They can't possibly top that
ha.
Suddenly... suprise buttsex
Can't leave a damn story unfinished
Please leave more warning next time
I plan to revise this ending a bit to make things clearer.
hot shit!
Hey everyone: I'd love it if you'd read this revised ending and let me know what you think now.
I intended it to be a little bit bittersweet, but also fundamentally really happy. It should work out for them, since they're a very cute couple.
secret dating = secret butt fun = secret buttsex?
me gusta?
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YOUR COMMENT MADE MY WEEK
Sex works better than the elements of harmony
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LOL wow it looks like you are right but i wonder no i hope there is a follow up to this based on THIS ending...
(there might be more story in fact i think this is a pretty good ending (not just becuase of the sudden MATURE label) but like i said maybe there is some hope to continue...)
(PS:whats the bite going to do?)
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i loled to that then i loled to what you replied to.
160559 I know right I was like what the fuck I liked moon better
lol " you can't contaminate the royal bloodline"
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA TO LATE BITCH"
Fucking awesome!
(no pun intended. wait, yes it was)
I'm probably the only one to have noticed, parts this are almost identical to Rarity's Raspberries...a wonderful concept anyway
Also, I've just read everything, my eyes hurt.
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Thanks for reading everything!
I can't really describe what this story made me feel, as it would require a very long and drawn out explanation and it's 5 in the morning.
All I can say is ... thank you.
This touched me in a way different, and much more powerful, than any fanfic I've ever read. More tears flowed than did with My Little Dashie.
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I know!