A nervous young stallion decides to take a shot at the new ruler of Equestia... and she accepts
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Do it Filly
Tracking this
Very well done looking forward to the next chapter.
Go Dawn. Sees equstria has new ruler, becomes rulers lover, helps rule equestria.
ZOMG this is a fabulous idea and you are presenting int in a really great way! please continue this, I can't wait to read more!
Nightmare lovin
Even possesed horse godesses need love.
A nihtmare romance with no twilight being enslaved? Do it
Wow, so Nightmare moon fic I actually like? I am eager to see where this leads.
I like the way you have start this off, I am looking forward to seeing how this will play out.
This is gonna be good. Tracking!
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Tracking!
Cant wait for more
Get through 7,000 peasants to unlock your new Thu'um. And yes, that is relevant, at the end.
Excellent
lol'ed to hard missed track button 12 times!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it already!!!
-Dashie
1 word comes to mind when mentioned the 7k more to attend to. DDAAAAAAAWWWWWWUUUUUUMMMMMMM
Tracking too and loving the idea, an alicorn out on a date with a common unicorn.
Cool story!
I Damn Love THIS!!!!! Amazing well written, if we consider the arguments. I REALLY want to see NM lovestruck, it will be sooooo good, also it will make her more "alive", will "our" hero be able to make NM feel love? Will he be able to "improve" her? Or will he be sent to moon?!I WANT TO KNOW!NOW!
5/5 deserved.
this is awesome
D'awww
Tracking
sooooo miss nightmare...when was the last time you got laid? hmmmmm?
so where is twilight and friends and celestia?
is this a NMM beat Celestia fic? or a NMM beat twilight and friends fic?
I'll be with you in a moment, I have some ranting to do.
148882 I have to ask; The hell is wrong with you? I've been watching you since I joined this site and nearly every story I see you're there saying something along the lines of 'Excellent'. While this may be fine once or twice, you've done it hundreds of times! Hundreds! Do you even think about what you are doing? Not to mention the amount of people you have on your watch list, bloody hell its ludicrous. Either you're a bot or you have far too much time on your hands.
*deep breaths*
Anyway, back to the story. Very well executed and a plot twist that honestly surprised me, I haven't been that shocked in a while. Best of luck to you, this is something that should continue.
Oooh shiiiiiit.....*clicks tracking button*
7,000....I'm with ya Moon. Who the fuck wants to hear the same question 7,000 times?
can't wait for the next chapter tho.
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Is that a scootolauncher?
where's the comedy tag?
Holy cheese and crackers! This got to be a featured story? And all of the views? The comments? WHOA!
Thanks everyone!
P.S. I'm now... slightly paralyzed with fear about how to follow up this first chapter... but I'll try
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Worse. He'll get sent to the sun.
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I'm glad you like it; it means a lot to me.
"Tell him the date. Happens. NOW."
I'm sorry, that'd be my response as well to 7000 personal requests to raise the sun...
Now I await MOAR!
yes...this must go on...
Tracking, because Nightmare Moon is best pony.
Proceed...
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Hahaha "buck it, tell him the date is now"
lmao with that
This really caught my eye, and the first chapter was pretty solid, save for a few grammatical errors. I'm tracking this, and looking forward to more chapters in the future.
I am quite enthralled with this concept, SwiperTheFox, and you have proven to be an excellent writer. I'm only done the first chapter, but I already love this story!
*Clicks next chapter*
"BUCK IT"
...I snorted.
-Delta-
Just letting you know I've started reading.
Not bad so far. I've not actually read a romance fic centered around Nightmare Moon before. I like how you're touching upon how she really just wanted justice against those who ignored her night. I always saw her as not so much "evil" but very misguided and ignorant of the fact that ignoring her duties could be catastrophic for her subjects. But I also considered Nightmare and Luna to be two minds sharing the same body, so it's kind of hard to read Nightmare referring to Celestia as "her sister" for me.
I'll see if I can get it finished in the next week or so.
"You, subject," Moon said, the condensation just dripping off of her voice, "May use the term 'Your Highness' in this court. Further infractions against the royal office will be punished, we assure you."
not to be a jerk but i think you mean condescension I wouldn't normally bring it up but it is one the first sentences and as such makes up part of the first impression
edit: dear celestia that ending was good, much like the rest of it will be im sure...
"You, subject," Moon said, the condensation just dripping off of her voice, "May use the term 'Your Highness' in this court. Further infractions against the royal office will be punished, we assure you."
I think you meant condemnation
Is Celestia alive in this universe? On that matter, is the Main 6?
lolz
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I hope you like the rest of it!
1022467 I think 'condescension' is what he meant. Condescension is talking down to someone, like you're better than them, which is exactly what nightmare is doing, while condemnation is like cursing someone. Like if someone was trapped in a burning building, and you walked away, you'd have condemned them to death. They'd have been condemned to die.