Chapter 3: Lonely Night
Aurum lay there, alone. He was cold and the symbol on the wall was gone, yet Luna left the screen behind for him to watch. He just lay there and watched, and waited. The night was proving to be a long one. He slowly felt himself slip away into sleep, watching the screen, and waiting.
Aurum awoke, still in the Disharmony. He felt dead, and very cold. He looked to the screen and he could see his pony body shifting as if slowly coming to life. He could not move anything below his shoulders. His final human hours were upon him, and he could feel it. He was sweating all over, yet he wasn’t hot, just very, very cold.
An hour later Aurum’s soul began to leave his human self. It parted slowly and painfully. It began as intense heat in his toes. The pain then spread to his feet and it became a pulsing sore pain. Once the pain climbed above his ankles his toes went numb and the pain shifted to bitter cold as if he was freezing to death. Eventually the pain reached his belly; it was absolute hunger and fatigue. Once it finally hit his head it became a migraine; a searing, stirring pain. He looked to the screen one last time, he screamed as a beautiful array of crimson and gold flashed over the eastern mountains.
/looks at cover art.
This can't end well.
Ah, not much. It wasn't glaringly bad, but it was pretty generic...
2015564 Right you are, because guess what time it is?!
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Chapter 1.
BECAUSE WHEN MAKING A GARY STU, ALWAYS REMEMBER TO GIVE THEM SOMETHING OUTLANDISH AND FUCKING CANON BREAKING.
WHY IS THIS A THING.
I WOULD WAIT 21 YEARS TO TAP THAT ASS TOO. IT AIN'T EVEN LEGAL TO MAKE AN ATTEMPT WHEN HE'S 18.
ALL THE THINGS IN LIFE THAT HAVE ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO DO WITH THE FUCKING TANGIBLE WORLD.
BECAUSE A NORMAL PERSON PONY, 21 YEARS OF AGE, WON'T BE GETTING HAMMERED OUT OF THEIR MIND, NO, THEY'LL BE STUDYING DIMENSIONAL THEORY.
NO ONE EVER IS.
HAH, EAT SHIT ARMAGEDDON FANATICS.
I don't have anything to say to this sentence. Oh wait, yes I do; ITS CALLED PEER PRESSURE ASSHOLE SEARCH IT UP.
SAID NO ONE, EVER.
YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH.
Chapter 2:
Well most people do after a nice hard anal dicking.
WELL GEE WIZ, I GUESS THAT DATE RAPE DRUG'S WEARING OFF.
Wait what?
THE FUCK?
What you neglected to say was how the voice then immediately shouted: BEND OVER.
I'm at a loss as to how anyone can sound like that, minus a sex change operation gone terribly wrong.
You're trying to make him into this super cool chosen bad ass and yet he keeps passing out like an 18th century lady.
AND FAPPED.
Chapter 3:
Aurum is now a zombie.
Ehh, I got nothing from here on out, so in conclusion: 24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m76259zb661r5cmqwo1_500.gif
2015838
Arrrgh. You've beaten me to it. I wanted to bash it fi-i-i-irist!
2015838 OH GOD MY RIBSSSSSS ! You are my new favorite fanfic basher.
good story.
Look guys, I just started and the story is still developing, but Mr.Ignorable, that was hilarious.