Hmm...a rather interesting story concept. Could be intruiging if handled well.
Please consider this my application.

I can understand the description, I througt he was a stalker or something like that..

I image Twilight saing something like "Is already in?", probably it will hurt like a stab

Not Bad...

I wanna know what happened 3 nights ago
Did they do the deed?
Did he cheat?
Did he eat meat?
TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED

I told you in the last two paragraphs, its purposely a little obscure.

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Compared to stallions, he has a crayon dick.

Looks entertaining thus far, I'll eagerly await what hilarity might ensue. Feel free to hit me up if you still need a prereader/editor.

You have better write more or else.

I have an idea what happens and and aww he didnt deserve that..

Oh the shame the shame

Hang in there dude its not the equipment its the