I'm so sorry I didn't notice one of the chapters was unpublished! It was the prologue. So now it makes a whole lot more sense!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Chapters need to be longer but other then that no complaints cant wait for next chapter

i could surprisingly fap to this

That awkward moment when your name is in a clopfic.

1946970 Ha im sorry that must be really wierd...

I'm liking the conflict in this, how even though he gets transported to Equestria and morphed to a pony, the wounds from the accident reappear/ resurface. The reaction of "I don't wanna die" when faced with the very real possibility of death.
A thing to consider is changing viewpoints and where things the protagonist loses consciousness, to have Twilight's perspective on the unfolding events, her emotions, what she's thinking, or if not that, what she's saying.
One thing, She (Twilight) is accompanied by a companion. Does the companion go to fetch the other five element bearers? It's a little detail, but impacts how the story may flow from thence, so bringing in more however briefly, might help flesh the story out. Because, otherwise it's Twilight and her companion, and then it's suddenly the other five rushing towards her. Does she use a magical telepathy to get in contact with them, if she didn't send her companion to round up the five? It's something to consider doing, should you chose to edit and republish this.