Honey hole? Damn, the sexual innuendos are almost as bad as the Star Wars pun. I swear I'm reading a screen play for a pony porn film. I'm almost surprised you didn't include the scene where Leia (Twilight) kisses Luke (Luna). I thought if you're going to go outright voyeur on Luna's part, you were going to throw in some implied incest there. That and I think Celestia would have been perfect for that scene. "Scruffy Headed Nerfhearder!"
"But first, you must prove you can love me. Love me completely. Prove that you are worthy of my love in return...You must learn to love yourself...Learn to do this Twilight, and I will take you as my lover!
I swear to Twilight, if this ends up like Romance Reports and there isn't Twiluna at the end, I'm going to punch a kitten.
If I where to get a clone, I want it to be female. I'm strait. But I still find this story interesting on an artistic level and I look forward to the next chapter.
Twilight * Cheerilee * Celestia polyamorous romance with only subtle hints of clop.
Yes, I saw a lot of subtle hints and nods to other stories in this. I'm almost offended none of mine were included before realizing "Oh, right, why would they be?" and then I sulked and punched a kitten.
2255469 No, it's not redeemable, not yet anyways. IT started out teasing the fuck out of TwiLuna (best / 2nd best pairing to me), then drove that train off a cliff, pissed on the remains, and then blew them up with some C4 then Hellstrike missles after that for good measure. That's where people take umbrage to Romance Reports, and why I fucking hate it. So, even if Celestia ended up in their little group, it's still a shitfic in my eyes, just for that bit there.
This plot smells familiar... don't take that out of context! I'm referring to the story element plot. Regardless, its a plot I do enjoy... don't take that out of context either!
As soon as Luna started asking Twilight if they were to be lovers, I knew it was leading up to the greatest life lesson of all time: LEARN TO LOVE YOURSELF
Twilight's dream picked up where it left off, in the next logical scene. Which is to say, dream logic. Which is to say, completely illogical. She was standing on a metal precipice, suspended precariously over what seemed like a bottomless pit. She hung on for dear life by one hoof. Princess Celestia stood menacingly between her and the path to safety.
"Join me Twilight, and together we can rule over all of Equestria!"
"I'll never join you!" Twilight shouted back.
"Luna never told you what happened to your mother."
"She told me enough! She told me you killed her!"
- Luna watched excitedly, unseen as she munched on some dreamer's popcorn. This was her favorite part!
"No Twilight. I am your mother!"
"No. That's not true. That's impossible!"
"Search your feelings you know it to be true!"
"NOOO!" Twilight cried out!
"Join me and together we will rule Equestria as mother and daughter!"
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2250776: Thank you Ted.
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I can't say yes enough.
This thing is pretty awesome.
Edit: Congrats on the feature by the way.
Honey hole? Damn, the sexual innuendos are almost as bad as the Star Wars pun. I swear I'm reading a screen play for a pony porn film. I'm almost surprised you didn't include the scene where Leia (Twilight) kisses Luke (Luna). I thought if you're going to go outright voyeur on Luna's part, you were going to throw in some implied incest there. That and I think Celestia would have been perfect for that scene. "Scruffy Headed Nerfhearder!"
Is this gonna go Romance Reports? Teasing or starting off with the Twiluna and discarding it for something else?
Your telling me ===> You're.
This is the greatest story ever. End of discussion.
I swear to Twilight, if this ends up like Romance Reports and there isn't Twiluna at the end, I'm going to punch a kitten.
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THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE.
There's a reason I hated stories with Cheerilee in it for months on end.
I'll check it out later but this sort of sounds like "Perfect for me". Though I think that one kinda died.
I will read this... purely for research, of course.
2250782 your arm's a bit buff there Shakespeare, been a.... doing these often?
Unf. Delicious. Hilariously sexy Star Wars puns-filled story by a renowned author? Tracked. No regrets. I shall be watching.
"My own clone! Now either of us will be virgins!"
so many star wars references
If I where to get a clone, I want it to be female. I'm strait. But I still find this story interesting on an artistic level and I look forward to the next chapter.
..................*faves then faints*
wow! can't wait to see how this turns out!
You have my attention.
I like the comic on the cover photo. Really is a joy killer though~
Hah, I lay claim to the blame for this idea.
:3
Sadly, I do have to say everything feels rushed and artificial. Perhaps an editor would help?
I just found a picture that fits in PERFECTLY with this story.
WARNING: MATURE CONTENT
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Maybe it was made by someone who read this story.
WTF am I reading? And why do I love it?
Questions that on one will ever answer.
Congrats on the featured
Huh. Killing Celestia seems to be a recurring theme in her dreams.
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The most recent sequel made it all better.
Twilight * Cheerilee * Celestia polyamorous romance with only subtle hints of clop.
Yes, I saw a lot of subtle hints and nods to other stories in this. I'm almost offended none of mine were included before realizing "Oh, right, why would they be?" and then I sulked and punched a kitten.
2254637 They wouldn't let me use that. I tried. Even with censoring.
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No, it's not redeemable, not yet anyways. IT started out teasing the fuck out of TwiLuna (best / 2nd best pairing to me), then drove that train off a cliff, pissed on the remains, and then blew them up with some C4 then Hellstrike missles after that for good measure. That's where people take umbrage to Romance Reports, and why I fucking hate it. So, even if Celestia ended up in their little group, it's still a shitfic in my eyes, just for that bit there.
For the sake of humankind, carry on with this Story! +fav
2252069 Okay but this Luna isn't a bastard who apparently bears a disproportionate resemblance to a cat, so it probably shouldn't end the same way.
Also I liked Romance Reports for the alt ending.
This plot smells familiar... don't take that out of context! I'm referring to the story element plot.
Regardless, its a plot I do enjoy... don't take that out of context either!
Bum bum BUUUUUUUUUM!!
2277414 *snicker* you said plot. sexy sexy plot.
2250782 Beautiful! Simply beautiful! Damn fine show, Shakespearicles!
And then Like a PIMP Luna goes:
Heh...
this cracked me up
so many references so much laughter actually choked on my apple cider
moustaches for you great author...
As soon as Luna started asking Twilight if they were to be lovers, I knew it was leading up to the greatest life lesson of all time:
LEARN TO LOVE YOURSELF
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