*Sees a fresh new story* This gonna be gud, or else...

Gave your story a thumbs up, just cause of the cover picture :D Didn't even read it yet. Sounds good though.

Well this seems interesting. I will be reading this.
Just one thing. Equestria isn't the established name of the FiM world. Equestria is really just that one country, or less likley one continent.

Good luck with all of your endeavors.

Well, it sure will be interesting seeing him try to explain this to his parents...

Nice, Fresh. Me liked. Until he said: Your family is going with!

I's like: Welp. This ruins everything. I can't read this now. This premise ruins all the immersion.

So yeah. I won't read the next chapters. Sorry. But that's just MY personal taste.

It's very well written, the premise is original and the whole thing just seems "fresh".

You have my like.

2240763 I'm sorry you feel that way, but your opinion is understandable.

This fic is somewhat meant to be a satire on the whole HiE genre, especially such fics as I blame you and Xenophilla, which inspired this.
We see a lot of fics that involve one guy getting sent to the land of ponies, and how he either settles right into things or freaks out. So instead, I used a with all kinds of perspectives (one whose a brony but is starstruck, one who is young and pissed off, and two who are just baffled by everything)
Will there be sex? Yes. Will there be comedy? I can try. Will there be world-building alongside cultural confusion? Definitely.

A very interesting take on the usual HiE fare. The inclusion of the main character's family is an interesting change. I, for one, look forward to more.

good story
but personally i have a problem with "1)" and "2)"
you could always try to use "first" and "secondly"

Small but obese cat?

2253258 When I see cats, they're either super-skinny or hella fat
'Sides, I know from experience- nothing wakes you up faster than twenty pounds of furball jumping on your chest.
Me:
Cat:

I actually had an odese car 28 kg of car.
Heaven always eat all The liverchops

Looks interesting so far. I'm keeping an eye on this.

"Code Geass?"
"Too British."

my dear boy, there's no such thing *sips tea*
anyway, this has potential. while it's not bad, certainly by fanfiction standards, it does feel a little below peace and isolation. I think that with a little work * cough*editor* cough* it would be far better. all in all, a interesting debut-, sure to keep me sated while I weight for Adam to start popping some bitch asses. *butters crumpet and places in mouth. chews the swallows, before dabbing lips with napkin* good day. *disappears in a puff of tea, to go and explore code Geass.*

Now this will be interesting!

this has some potential. loved those last two lines Wonder how the pony hating bro going to take all. And the parents, god I can just see the mother fainting.