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Borders Are...

Ponies have existed with an air of love and tolerance, in their longest hours. Many ponies live by these peaceful guidelines, but others show their true colours.

This story was inspired by Serj Tankian's 'Border's Are'. I implore you to like it, but that's entirely your choice.

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TheNocturnalLoner

TheNocturnalLoner #1 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Nice job! This story is certainly not like others I've read before, and as such it is interesting. It is also very well written. I think I'll be keeping my eye on this story.

GlitchyProductions

GlitchyProductions #2 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · ·

For those who don't...

The authors inspiration!

Fuck, let's figure it out!

Guy_Incognito

Guy_Incognito #3 · Jan 2nd, 2013 · · ·

Oh, man Lazy_Bones. You're quickly becoming my new 'fave' on this site.

There are very few authors (At least few who's work I've read) who can take so few words (I don't think your story uses more than 2000, if that at all.) and manage to do with them what you did. Your descriptions are short, but strong. I find lots of authors (And I'd easily include myself in that realm) can use an entire paragraph to really hammer in a thought, but you have this amazing ability to just come out and say it, and not only that but 'say it' in a way that reads exceptionally smooth and enjoyably. Bravo for that :-p

I could go on for probably two or three more paragraphs about why I thought this was great, but I'm sure it'd get far too long and exceedingly redundant. So I'll just leave off with this: Please. Write. More.