I'd almost forgotten that I'd followed this one! Nice to see it updated.
*reads*
Oh... oh dear, Rarity. You've gone and stuck your horn in it now, haven't you?
You've got your little sister convinced that sex is part of *filial* love (and before somepony else makes the joke, I will - this is fillyal love, a totally different topic!), and so you're gonna need some serious help to wean her off of that... preferably before she tries seducing your parents!
As for the other CMC's... why am I suddenly picturing Applejack running through town, being chased by Applebloom Pepe le Pew style?
Sweetie Belle mistakenly discovers a spell that leads to her making sweet, sweet love to her older sister. Having discovered a new hobby, Sweetie will end up having many experimental encounters with her closest friends and family.
Should be
Sweetie Belle mistakenly discovers a spell that leads to her making sweet, Sweet love to her older sister. Having discovered a new hobby, Sweetie will end up having many experimental encounters with her closest friends and family.
2031377 I be laughing so hard if I saw Apple Bloom doing that to her sister.
And Rarity is having very sexual feeling for her sister, wonder what the Princesses think of that?
This makes me question if Rarity will bring her love for her sister outside of her home and if so...what othwer's even more so her friends and the Gods wil think of such.
Wow im shocked for it being a strictly romance story with a......well abstract...(i guess is the word I would use) shipping idea that most wouldnt jump into; however,
the way you portrayed the events with such emotion, detail, and sincerity to each characters personality ive got to say id like to see more and more of where this story will go on from her. Bravo
I like how you're setting this up, very cute, I guess is the right word. And I think I speak for most of us when I say...APPLEJACK x APPLE BLOOM, GIVE US APPLEJACK x APPLE BLOOM!!!!!
That was actually meant to be removed when I decided this fic would be strictly romance, if you're looking for a bunch of encounters with different ponies keep an eye out for my Applebloom fic.
"Well I love you too, and we both like what we did yesterday, so what could be wrong with it?"
A question that has haunted biopyschosocial ethics for years. Once upon a time, incest was preferred among nobles to ensure their bloodlines would stay "pure and clean." In more recent years, marriage and mating with one's cousin was a norm. Even Edgar Allan Poe's poem "Annabelle Lee" was written to describe his love for his niece (or cousin, I can't remember which it was.) So why do the norms exist that it's wrong to mate with one's sibling? Where did that mindset come from? Why do people tend to instinctively agree that it should be wrong? Why are there "special cases" for incest that are considered acceptable, like cousin x cousin?
We live in an age where almost all of yesterdays sexual taboos are acceptable anymore, but incest is still heavily frowned upon. Though, no body is really sure why they dislike the idea. The best argument anyone can usually have is, " Well, it just seems gross to have sex with your sibling/parent." The idea appears to be so instinctive that people will automatically reject the notion without hesitation.
This could possibly be related to humans natural defense against inbreeding. Though not all things hold true across the spectrum, else we wouldn't have taboos nor norms to begin with.
Often times, those who participate in incestuous acts are considered to have a psychological disorder and risk ridicule from their peers if they're open about it. Considering that many people are incapable of forming such attractions, it's easy to understand why some people just cannot relate to the ones that are open about their relationship. Though that inability to understand is often expressed in ostracizing and belittling, which is clearly worse than just being in a harmless relationship.
Knowing that the only real reason we can have for being opposed to incestuous acts is an evolutionary defense mechanism designed to prevent it, should we honestly continue to label it as taboo? Humans are beyond acting out merely for the sake of reproduction. We're developed to form relationships on more complicated things than solely on our primal instincts.
So knowing this, is it ethical to say that people engaging in incestuous relationships should not be allowed to? Persons with sexual disorders and psychological disorders are still allowed to go about their business as usual. It's unethical to treat one thing under the same category differently than another.
The only thing I know for sure is that there will be some reform on the ethics of sexual normalcy and social acceptance. First it was Homosexuality. Next it's Incest and Beastiality.
Incest, Pedophilia, Polygamy; I love risque topics.
If this story is to go how I plan it to, it's going to be one hell of a wild ride. I really hope it does.
so AB is goona ask AJ to do it with her? i can already see the mob outside the boutique also awesome you are continuing it, make it long and with lots of sex, fillies and drama (and humour too if you want)
Oh, have to say it was a unexpected turn in the story with the start. That's rather neat. (think I found a grammatical error though: "to small hard nub", "used to horn to fuck herself") Not personally too much of a fan of magical phallus's, but eh, they partially work. Otherwise she could just use a real one. (toy that is) Though, have to say it's quite "rude" of her to think of Sweetie with "something else". I get why, with recent events and all, doesn't make it much less rude however. But overall, quite well made "remorse" scene. Her emotions felt a bit flat at times, (very little of it as a whole, but was still there, so overall seeming accurate emotions/response) but still above average. Can say on a side note, don't overly think AJ would be one to treat sex as "dirty". She possibly could be, but if anything, they seem like a family "open" about it. (not in "that" sense of "open", but you know what I mean right? Heh, loved the "child mentality" though xP Can imagine that they'd be skeptical that she grew a wang though, since "that's something colts have". And even if Sweetie felt a tad bit "too eager", it does fit to a degree with "recent virgin hype", and a child's mind of just wanting more. (though, the coy smile felt off... to a degree, she has done them before, but it doesn't quite fit the "mood")
(and derp, random info I forgot last time: I know you likely went with "it's magic, I ain't got to explain shit", but in you'd go accurately, Sweetie's cum would have been quite liquidy and transparent. Since while minors can ejaculate (both genders) the male load, unlike the female, contains stuff from both the prostate, and the testicles, as opposed to females only needing prostate fluid. So her load should have been "water-y" as the lack of sperm, only being the gunk it swims in. This would also remove the risk of throwing up from swallowing too much as it lacks the salty part. Would be slightly less though. Just totally random, and I know you can use magic as logic as said, but just sharing for the randomness out of it hehe. Can say though, if you do a AJ/AB part, rather curious how that would play out. Would imagine you'd just pull put toys, (or the generic "pull out BigMac") but you might surprise me.)
Not overly sure which personality you gave Sweetie, since she seems to shift from naive to dominant or what to call it... nor sure what anatomy you go after heh. And have to say I really liked that she questioned her sister (more or less) if she liked her for who she was, or if she just wanted what the magic gave her. (might not have been intended that way, but it's how I saw it.) And haha, loved the clam jam Rarity pulled on her, just leaving her with a raging/throbbing hard-on. Was certainly unexpected, and overall neat. And found her "tactic" of doing so very well. Holding off on something Sweetie really wants in exchange for that she does "her tasks". While I could see Rarity overuse this possibly, I can also see her use it well. Again, not a fan of unicorns being able to do more or less any spell ever (bar from "too difficult"), but can be somewhat okay with it for now.
Oh my fucking God, you're always so busy trying to be technical with everything that you can't even enjoy the story. If you want to analyze the mechanics of the story as it develops, go right ahead. If you want to analyze the anatomy as described, be my guest. If you want to compare it to cliches, more power to you. But what you're failing to realize is that the story is just in its second chapter. There was hardly any description of the anatomy. Everything is cliche. I know you're an eager commenter, but you can't review something that hasn't even left the exposition yet. We're given enough detail to imagine the scenes, but a large part of what we picture comes from our own imagination. Being cliche does not make a story bad, it's how they go about it.
Please, Satch. You really jump-the-gun with your comments because half of what you say come from your own biased past experience. You imagined a super-futa Sweetie Belle, so you assume that she wrote out, "Sweetie Belle grew a super-futa dick." Which is not what was written at all.
Before you comment on the story from now on, at least make sure you have a thorough understanding of what was actually written vs. what was implied vs. what you imagined. Analyzing stories and writing reviews are often hard for people because they sometimes can't differentiate between the three. Learn that difference, Satch. Learn it for Equestria.
i can only imagine applejacks reaction
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There ya go.
2030536 my thought exactly.
This demands for a sidechapter
You are such a tease with this chapter
Well I really hope that the next chapter worth the cliffhanger
Hm. Commence read.
It has another chapter.
And a book of spells, that can only make things crazier.
i am enjoying your story
I'd almost forgotten that I'd followed this one! Nice to see it updated.
*reads*
Oh... oh dear, Rarity. You've gone and stuck your horn in it now, haven't you?
You've got your little sister convinced that sex is part of *filial* love (and before somepony else makes the joke, I will - this is fillyal love, a totally different topic!), and so you're gonna need some serious help to wean her off of that... preferably before she tries seducing your parents!
As for the other CMC's... why am I suddenly picturing Applejack running through town, being chased by Applebloom Pepe le Pew style?
The conversation between applebloom and applejack is going to be very awkward
Your boy, Jaby sent me over. I usually try to stray away from these sorta reads, but if IJAB says it's good, then that's enough for me.
i can't tell if i'm a horrible person for enjoying this. then again, i don't really give a buck. MORE PLEASE!
I want to see Applejacks reaction That is going to be very awkward
Very interesting I say I should say that is wrong but good piece and use of words
Should be
Incest never sounded sweeter
I'm really liking the fact that Rarity has to choose between morals, and keeping Sweetie Belle happy.
I am lovin' this!
2030536 I'd love a sidechapter of that one!
Either way this chapter was a teaser, can't wait for more to come
2031377 I be laughing so hard if I saw Apple Bloom doing that to her sister.
And Rarity is having very sexual feeling for her sister, wonder what the Princesses think of that?
This makes me question if Rarity will bring her love for her sister outside of her home and if so...what othwer's even more so her friends and the Gods wil think of such.
Ohhhhhhhhh, you're in for it, Rarity!
Truly love the story. Oh sweet Celestia what is wrong with me?!
AJ will be like also shit just got real also you said closest friends and family what ever happened to friends
... Go on.
Wow im shocked for it being a strictly romance story with a......well abstract...(i guess is the word I would use) shipping idea that most wouldnt jump into; however,
the way you portrayed the events with such emotion, detail, and sincerity to each characters personality ive got to say id like to see more and more of where this story will go on from her. Bravo
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Thank Faust, an UPDATE!!!
I like how you're setting this up, very cute, I guess is the right word. And I think I speak for most of us when I say...APPLEJACK x APPLE BLOOM, GIVE US APPLEJACK x APPLE BLOOM!!!!!
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That was actually meant to be removed when I decided this fic would be strictly romance, if you're looking for a bunch of encounters with different ponies keep an eye out for my Applebloom fic.
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You'll all get to see what happens between those two soon enough,
2035556 Is it wrong that I'm looking forward to it.
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Not at all, in fact I'm looking forward to writing it so much that it's going to get an entire spin-off fic rather than just a short side chapter.
"Well I love you too, and we both like what we did yesterday, so what could be wrong with it?"
A question that has haunted biopyschosocial ethics for years.
Once upon a time, incest was preferred among nobles to ensure their bloodlines would stay "pure and clean." In more recent years, marriage and mating with one's cousin was a norm. Even Edgar Allan Poe's poem "Annabelle Lee" was written to describe his love for his niece (or cousin, I can't remember which it was.)
So why do the norms exist that it's wrong to mate with one's sibling? Where did that mindset come from? Why do people tend to instinctively agree that it should be wrong? Why are there "special cases" for incest that are considered acceptable, like cousin x cousin?
We live in an age where almost all of yesterdays sexual taboos are acceptable anymore, but incest is still heavily frowned upon. Though, no body is really sure why they dislike the idea. The best argument anyone can usually have is, " Well, it just seems gross to have sex with your sibling/parent." The idea appears to be so instinctive that people will automatically reject the notion without hesitation.
This could possibly be related to humans natural defense against inbreeding. Though not all things hold true across the spectrum, else we wouldn't have taboos nor norms to begin with.
Often times, those who participate in incestuous acts are considered to have a psychological disorder and risk ridicule from their peers if they're open about it. Considering that many people are incapable of forming such attractions, it's easy to understand why some people just cannot relate to the ones that are open about their relationship. Though that inability to understand is often expressed in ostracizing and belittling, which is clearly worse than just being in a harmless relationship.
Knowing that the only real reason we can have for being opposed to incestuous acts is an evolutionary defense mechanism designed to prevent it, should we honestly continue to label it as taboo?
Humans are beyond acting out merely for the sake of reproduction. We're developed to form relationships on more complicated things than solely on our primal instincts.
So knowing this, is it ethical to say that people engaging in incestuous relationships should not be allowed to? Persons with sexual disorders and psychological disorders are still allowed to go about their business as usual. It's unethical to treat one thing under the same category differently than another.
The only thing I know for sure is that there will be some reform on the ethics of sexual normalcy and social acceptance. First it was Homosexuality. Next it's Incest and Beastiality.
Incest, Pedophilia, Polygamy; I love risque topics.
If this story is to go how I plan it to, it's going to be one hell of a wild ride. I really hope it does.
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Annabelle Lee is about his about his cousin you under-educated twat. Don't come up in here acting like you know more about Poe than I do.
Please feel free to tell me how you think it's going to go so I can be sure to steer the story line in the opposite direction.
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2036467 I will now love you forever
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Flip sticks. I /said/ "or his cousin", you illiterate sack of compost. Maybe if you knew how to read, you would have seen that.
Address me on Facebook for any additional insight on the story. I'll gladly help you in anyway that I can.
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awesome Want more
Oh god. here comes the draaaamaaaaaaa!!!!! ^-^ totally worth the wait even if it was a short chapter!
so AB is goona ask AJ to do it with her? i can already see the mob outside the boutique
also awesome you are continuing it, make it long and with lots of sex, fillies and drama (and humour too if you want)
Oh, have to say it was a unexpected turn in the story with the start. That's rather neat. (think I found a grammatical error though: "to small hard nub", "used to horn to fuck herself") Not personally too much of a fan of magical phallus's, but eh, they partially work. Otherwise she could just use a real one. (toy that is) Though, have to say it's quite "rude" of her to think of Sweetie with "something else". I get why, with recent events and all, doesn't make it much less rude however. But overall, quite well made "remorse" scene. Her emotions felt a bit flat at times, (very little of it as a whole, but was still there, so overall seeming accurate emotions/response) but still above average. Can say on a side note, don't overly think AJ would be one to treat sex as "dirty". She possibly could be, but if anything, they seem like a family "open" about it. (not in "that" sense of "open", but you know what I mean right? Heh, loved the "child mentality" though xP Can imagine that they'd be skeptical that she grew a wang though, since "that's something colts have". And even if Sweetie felt a tad bit "too eager", it does fit to a degree with "recent virgin hype", and a child's mind of just wanting more. (though, the coy smile felt off... to a degree, she has done them before, but it doesn't quite fit the "mood")
(and derp, random info I forgot last time: I know you likely went with "it's magic, I ain't got to explain shit", but in you'd go accurately, Sweetie's cum would have been quite liquidy and transparent. Since while minors can ejaculate (both genders) the male load, unlike the female, contains stuff from both the prostate, and the testicles, as opposed to females only needing prostate fluid. So her load should have been "water-y" as the lack of sperm, only being the gunk it swims in. This would also remove the risk of throwing up from swallowing too much as it lacks the salty part. Would be slightly less though. Just totally random, and I know you can use magic as logic as said, but just sharing for the randomness out of it hehe. Can say though, if you do a AJ/AB part, rather curious how that would play out. Would imagine you'd just pull put toys, (or the generic "pull out BigMac") but you might surprise me.)
Not overly sure which personality you gave Sweetie, since she seems to shift from naive to dominant or what to call it... nor sure what anatomy you go after heh. And have to say I really liked that she questioned her sister (more or less) if she liked her for who she was, or if she just wanted what the magic gave her. (might not have been intended that way, but it's how I saw it.) And haha, loved the clam jam Rarity pulled on her, just leaving her with a raging/throbbing hard-on. Was certainly unexpected, and overall neat. And found her "tactic" of doing so very well. Holding off on something Sweetie really wants in exchange for that she does "her tasks". While I could see Rarity overuse this possibly, I can also see her use it well. Again, not a fan of unicorns being able to do more or less any spell ever (bar from "too difficult"), but can be somewhat okay with it for now.
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nice
enough said
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Oh my fucking God, you're always so busy trying to be technical with everything that you can't even enjoy the story.
If you want to analyze the mechanics of the story as it develops, go right ahead. If you want to analyze the anatomy as described, be my guest. If you want to compare it to cliches, more power to you.
But what you're failing to realize is that the story is just in its second chapter. There was hardly any description of the anatomy. Everything is cliche.
I know you're an eager commenter, but you can't review something that hasn't even left the exposition yet.
We're given enough detail to imagine the scenes, but a large part of what we picture comes from our own imagination.
Being cliche does not make a story bad, it's how they go about it.
Please, Satch. You really jump-the-gun with your comments because half of what you say come from your own biased past experience. You imagined a super-futa Sweetie Belle, so you assume that she wrote out, "Sweetie Belle grew a super-futa dick." Which is not what was written at all.
Before you comment on the story from now on, at least make sure you have a thorough understanding of what was actually written vs. what was implied vs. what you imagined.
Analyzing stories and writing reviews are often hard for people because they sometimes can't differentiate between the three.
Learn that difference, Satch. Learn it for Equestria.
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TL:DR
This is quite disturbing yet I want to read more...
What is wrong with me?!
You sick, lustful, hot, naughty sister mare bitches.
Please continue!
Can't control that lust for a little body, eh Rares.