Here it is, I took this off to do more editing on it. So enjoy my friends.

Hope it's good

1825505 Me to, this has been in writer hell for about A month I'll tell ya that.

1825513 Writer Hell is terrible, I go for visits

Like I said to you before, I don't usually read Halo: Equestria but this could be good!

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1825984 I just wish I can get my story out there and get it more views. But I still appreciate your help, and sorry about the A thing I thought I got them all in Word. I got to remind myself to never trust word for as long as I live.

This... could become amazing. I would love to read how all events will unfold.

1825997 If you want more views I can try and help out with that. I mean it's not shameless self-promoting when someone else does it!
Also I added it to the group struggling authors. That may help it get out there.

1826024 Thanks, you know sometimes I post a story with 6,000 words on it I have been working on it for months, trying to get it right and you know what happens...It gets only five views.

1826036 I know what you mean... Same thing happened to me with a Story called 'Lethal Misconceptions'... Only three views per chapter. I eventually put it on hiatus, while I work on my more popular stories... Too many stories are overlooked.

1826051 It happened to A story of mine called Industrial, I eventually took it off fimfic because of it's low popularity.

1826055 I'm sorry to hear that... I intend to make sure this story won't meet the same fate!

1826087 Thanks! The story goes in depth of the whole space jump thing in the game, it will explain how he got there.

1826093 Alright, that is good to know because without explaining it you'd have to use every authors excuse for not thinking... Magic.

1826128 My belief is that Equestria is on a different world unknown to humanity, so I'm not doing the magic excuse, I read many video game crossovers and try to avoid the unoriginal route.

1826144 Just a suggestion... Shaw-Fujikawa Slipspace drives can become very unstable... Anyway I'll be here if you need me.

Fuck. I hate halo crossovers that bring the covenant with him. This better be good or I'm going to frown upon your soul from the depths of writer hell.

1826666 Oh shit!!

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what about if they bring the prometheans ?

Alright... you're off the hook... For now.

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BTW.

Spartans don't die Jorge; they're just missing in action
Quote from ~Halo: Reach

THEY SAID THAT IN ALMOST EVERY SINGLE HALO BOOK EVER MADE.

1827336 yay, but that line was from reach.

1827360 But still.... You know... Stuff.

Oh forgot! Don't forget to add and comment.

cant wait im getting halo 4 for christmas my wifue is getting it for me cant wait ill love to play the game so yeah make more chapters

I'm confused. How the hell could the Princesses hear the Chief test-fire his weapon all the way from Canterlot. Gunfire is loud, yes, but Canterlot is several dozen kilometers away.

1842224 that's A good question, I believe it's the echo that she heard. It echoed in the wind.

so when will we be able to see the next chapter?

1863011 don't know, I have three different rough drafted chapters of chapter 1, which one I choose will be the one that will continue the fic.

1863388 oh ok, try not to spend too much time deciding lol

1863587 also I'm giving it some time to get more views.

1864127 good thinking

I always love the idea to do a Halo/ Mlp mix but i do have a couple points of criticism, and some advise to go with it. I apologize in advance if I come off as abrasive. When John said, "Is anyone there, this is sierra 117, I am currently in an unknown location and require a pelican out of the environment I am in." The Sierra is supposed to be capitalized, just for future reference, and the bigger one for me is "...require a pelican out of the environment I am in." As the machine of a man as he has a habit of being he would stuck closer to a military request such as 'Is anyone there? This is Sierra 1-1-7. I am currently in a unknown location and request for an immediate Evac." Couple other light notes. avoid a run-on sentence, bad grammar blah blah blah. And in my experience with the Halo inexperienced, they have a tendency to read it as "one hundred seventeen", instead of the military read "one one seven" thus the dashes (snicker ... Dash). Now I know this may be over stepping my boundaries as a brony/ halo fan/ redneck/ pc tech/ gamer/ eventual writer/ forever alone guy, but my Foreshadowing Senses (kinda Pinkie Sense but for more common sense. And believe me when I say mine are Good) says that this great potential to be a well written novel where Chief has lost his best friend and ends up in a world of peaceful, magical, blindingly colorful ponies. and has to cope with the loss and the Covenant and possibly be there Soldier he was never meant to be. Sorry I dragged on

1914247thxs for the comment, and thxs for reading my fanfic, more updates will come sortly.

Some Luna/Master Chief shipping

NOOOOOOOOOO!
OH GOD PLEASE NO!
NOOOOOOOOOO!

1950346but it did!! Muah hahahahahahaha!!!

Oh man oh man oh man!! I'm getting so hyped for the first chapter!!

1981784are you mad because I going to ship Luna with master chief? I can see people hating it because of it.

when will chapter one be released

Hey, how much longer until we get to see chapter 1? By the way I'm looking forward to see some luna x chief shipping. It's a very interesting concept for a halo crossover with mlp.

It's been a while now, and I'm really anxious for the first chapter if this is still being worked on. When do you think it will come out if this is still alive?

2244249relax, I'm still on it, the problem I'm working on is that my iPhone is fucking up and it is causing me to not be able to access google docs and google drive so I can't access my word documents. I don't know what the hell is going on with it but it will still be worked on, the hold is causing me to put hiatus on my other projects that I am still working on. -sigh- I hate it when shit happens..