I'm not sure if I can do "obscure". There's at least semi-canon with Twist and the boy she gave her card to.
Wait, that could be something- remember the other girl who wanted to give him a card? Tootsie Flute? She was crushed when Twist was faster. It would make sense for her to look for somepony else, right? And if she likes 'em plus-sized, she might very well decide to fill him up to her liking. How about Featherweight? He's a stick. I bet he'd bloat up nicely!
Though, the other kid who'd make a good victim star would be Snips, I think. He's already kind of rotund, you just need somepony else who wants to see him get bigger! Maybe one of the snobs, like Silver Spoon or Diamond Tiara. I wouldn't be surprised if they believe having a bloat beau is extremely fashionable now. The great Rarity has her blimply prince now, after all.
Obscure, obscure... how about- Trixie returning to the rock farm to get revenge on Pinkie's dad? Or somepony getting nabbed by Diamond Dogs, who decide they need to make sure their prisoner doesn't run away rather than have them dig. They can always use them for... amusement.
Or Zecora might run into Queen Chrysalis, who's looking for a new source of love. She brews her a love poison, gets her hooked up with some lonely pony, and suddenly, she's got more love than she'd ever need. More than she can just digest and burn off, at least, since besides staring into each other's eyes, they won't be doing much!
2413417 Donut Joe gets another chapter. That's the perfect storyline for who I have planned, but I just couldn't figure out how to get the two of them performing 'activities'. It's hard enough when my inner absurdist keeps trying to turn my clop into an existential deconstruction thereof, but I couldn't for the life of me get that one! Thanks!
2415309 That was sarcastic, although the idea of crotchmoobs does intrigue me. I might have to look into it.
2415309 Well, I'm sure a thousand years trapped in ice can't be healthy. I bet he's downright freezing!
2416680 I'll think about it, but you know how fickle muses can be.
2416686 What's this about typos? Spellcheck comes up blank except for names and sound effects. And I'm not sure what you mean by 'wall of text'. Do you want me to double space?
2425677 Well, everyone's suggestions have been filed and are all under consideration, but I had an idea the other night that just wouldn't leave me alone. Have a clue. upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/6/68/The_Cure_-_Bloodflowers.jpg Trust me, this is relevant and not just me screwing with you. Why would I screw with you? If you like my work you've got enough problems already, I don't need to add confusion to that list.
I'm not sure if I can do "obscure". There's at least semi-canon with Twist and the boy she gave her card to.
Wait, that could be something- remember the other girl who wanted to give him a card? Tootsie Flute? She was crushed when Twist was faster. It would make sense for her to look for somepony else, right? And if she likes 'em plus-sized, she might very well decide to fill him up to her liking. How about Featherweight? He's a stick. I bet he'd bloat up nicely!
Though, the other kid who'd make a good
victimstar would be Snips, I think. He's already kind of rotund, you just need somepony else who wants to see him get bigger! Maybe one of the snobs, like Silver Spoon or Diamond Tiara. I wouldn't be surprised if they believe having a bloat beau is extremely fashionable now. The great Rarity has her blimply prince now, after all.Obscure, obscure... how about- Trixie returning to the rock farm to get revenge on Pinkie's dad? Or somepony getting nabbed by Diamond Dogs, who decide they need to make sure their prisoner doesn't run away rather than have them dig. They can always use them for... amusement.
Or Zecora might run into Queen Chrysalis, who's looking for a new source of love. She brews her a love poison, gets her hooked up with some lonely pony, and suddenly, she's got more love than she'd ever need. More than she can just digest and burn off, at least, since besides staring into each other's eyes, they won't be doing much!
2413417 Donut Joe gets another chapter. That's the perfect storyline for who I have planned, but I just couldn't figure out how to get the two of them performing 'activities'. It's hard enough when my inner absurdist keeps trying to turn my clop into an existential deconstruction thereof, but I couldn't for the life of me get that one! Thanks!
2414924 Vunderbar. Simply vunderbar.
2414940
Ooh! I believe I have another story idea you can use.
This one, however, staring KingSombraxShiningArmorx(Maybe)Cadence. With Sombra being the fatty of course.
Also I notice in chapter 5, you gave Spitfire boobs. Can you give Soarin and other stallions moobs since you said your a moob-lover?
One word: WANT.
I also have another request:
Morbidly obese Spitfire, being fed by Rainbow Dash - a feeder Spitdash kinda thing. Please. Please.
2415309 That was sarcastic, although the idea of crotchmoobs does intrigue me. I might have to look into it.
2415309 Well, I'm sure a thousand years trapped in ice can't be healthy. I bet he's downright freezing!
2416680 I'll think about it, but you know how fickle muses can be.
2416686 What's this about typos? Spellcheck comes up blank except for names and sound effects. And I'm not sure what you mean by 'wall of text'. Do you want me to double space?
So what are you planning for us all in the chapter, greydoran?
2425677 Well, everyone's suggestions have been filed and are all under consideration, but I had an idea the other night that just wouldn't leave me alone. Have a clue.
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/6/68/The_Cure_-_Bloodflowers.jpg
Trust me, this is relevant and not just me screwing with you. Why would I screw with you? If you like my work you've got enough problems already, I don't need to add confusion to that list.
God damnit, you tease. That was a pizza massacre
But at least Spitfire got her turn.
This... This right here is why this story terrifys me. The ideas yes. The farting no.
YUS