This guy here has talent, he knows what he's writing. I'm trying to edit this story, removing basic errors and misspellings or sometimes serious grammar mistakes.
But my English is not the most perfect in all of Equestria, but being Polish I think it's good enough to help making this story readable for all of you, folks.
I love to be the one responsible for editing this story. I'm improving my English a lot by that. I'm trying my best.
Tis a good story, HOWEVER I believe that your characterizations of Pinkie Pie and Applejack were a bit off. Pinkie would have probably have given them a "Happy Couple party" And Applejack is usually the odd one out in these situations. Good story, but needs work.
This guy here has talent, he knows what he's writing. I'm trying to edit this story, removing basic errors and misspellings or sometimes serious grammar mistakes.
But my English is not the most perfect in all of Equestria, but being Polish I think it's good enough to help making this story readable for all of you, folks.
I love to be the one responsible for editing this story. I'm improving my English a lot by that. I'm trying my best.
good job, I doth enjoy this tale
CLIFFHANGERS!!
Tis a good story, HOWEVER
I believe that your characterizations of Pinkie Pie and Applejack were a bit off.
Pinkie would have probably have given them a "Happy Couple party"
And Applejack is usually the odd one out in these situations.
Good story, but needs work.
1828098 thanks for the idea for one of the endings, I think that it could work.
Ah, and thanks for reading my story, really
1827872 That's a relly small eufemism
hehe twi-luna is my second favorite pairing
tiny concern about it being rushed but other than that
Lovely story, I really want more