Tonight We're Gonna Party
written by Midnightshadow
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Actually that was alot more awesome then I expected.
A few parts could be smoother out a bit and some terms should be fixed but all around preety good.
I hope to see more
I remember this from EQD.
"Celestia leaped out of bed" should be "leapt."
"why," needs capitalization.
"dark blue winged," should be "dark-blue, winged, unicorn filly."
Also a few instances of letters after quotations not being capitalized.
Stupid sexy Flanders.
Darn! I thought this was TwiDash. Still reading it though!