Anonymous x Rainbow Dash x Vinyl Scratch Romance
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Alright, all caught up with everything I have written for Dynamic Entry now!
13.5 is supposedly much better than 9.5; so if you're into clop, I'd appreciate anything you have to say on it!
The POV switching: Don't worry, I'll be cutting waaaay back on that. I think I'll be sticking to Anon's POV for a while now, so you shouldn't have to worry about that for at least a couple chapters or so.
Now that I'm caught up, I can start focusing on writing new chapters rather than converting old ones. Any and all feedback is most appreciated!
Thanks for reading!
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>God damn you keep this pase up you'll have like 200000 words by tommorow afternoon lol.
Well, not 200K, but I'm finally caught up with where I am writing wise.
>I don't know what surprises me more how fast your putting out chapter, how huge they are or how freaking awesomely good they are. you are awesome mate
Haha, many thanks! Glad to know you're enjoying it so far!
Hope I can get some writing done sometime soon and maybe get another chapter out.
These updates have all been written for some time, just needed to be converted to prose. Now that it's finally done though, I can focus on writing new material!
Hopefully.
As far as chapter length goes... I usually just write and make a new chapter whenever.
Glad you think they're good though! Glad you're reading!
1761521plz don't cut buck on the POV changing too much apart from the inishal (or however you spell that. no spell check on my phone) confusion I really like those chapters give us some great insite. Oh and btw congratz your the 2 person now to make me hate fluttershy in a fic since I became a frequant reader on this site(I'm not count all the cruddy flutterrape storys or the poorly written ones or the ones that set out to do so) lol
Well I'm glad you managed to keep up! :D I did ask for at least another 3 didn't I? :3 Well done though! Looking forward to more! :)
Is Vinyl going to be back in the relationship?
dat last scene was very hot, nice
also the POV switching is actually kinda cool once you get used to it because it makes the entire story more dynamic I think?
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Daaaaaaammmmmmmmmnnnnn
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I'll be cutting back on the POV switches, not removing them entirely.
Haha, thanks!
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I can't directly answer that without giving spoilers, but I can assure you she's marked as a main character for a good reason.
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To be fair, life doesn't wait.
But yes, it is a bit of a fustercluck. Don't worry though, it's not all bad.
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Not quite a fix-all, but she is important to a bit of the story I'd say.
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When I have time to write, I'll do so; but the upload speed will likely be much slower than what it has been.
These chapters were just edited to prose, I've yet to write new chapters.
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I'll be cutting back on the switches, but not removing them entirely.
After editing this story, it does seem to get a bit confusing at times between switches.
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>The switching of character, while still making 'you' as the character threw this chapter off horribly for me. We are Anon, a human. Not Dash.
I can see why that might get confusing, but the entire story is written in the second person narrative. It made sense to me to keep it that way regardless of who we were seeing the world through. After editing this from greentext to prose, I noticed that the POV switches were getting to be a bit much. I'll be making them fewer and further between in future chapters.
>Also, the intermittent swapping around between 'Me' and 'Her' like above threw me off even more.
This part in particular was one of a few that I considered removing completely. This was a bit of Rainbow arguing with herself, a sort of brain talk if you will. It didn't exactly fit and does get confusing; I may go back and remove it still.
>Personally, I think this chapter would have been better completely from a First Person POV, rather than Second.
While that may or may not be true, I'm going to stick to the second person throughout this entire story.
At any rate, thanks for reading and leaving some feedback! It is most appreciated!
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Haha, I'm not too sure what you'd call it.
I'll stick with defensive reaction for now, I guess.
Thank you all for reading and leaving feedback!
Any and all feedback is most appreciated!
Don't feel bad about leaving negative feedback/criticism; I wouldn't know to improve if you didn't!
I hope to have more written soon, but my work schedule will be interfering with my writing significantly, so we'll see what happens.
1753133what are we going to do on th bed
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your a great witer and if you wer a girl i wud kiss you but
but a brohoof will be just as cool /)
Nice job
Will you be making more ch?
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Glad you're enjoying it!
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While Gabby Gums had been known to publish things that were inflammatory, not all of the articles were necessarily lies.
I figure Diamond Tiara would pull something like that to get at Rainbow some more. I see Rainbow as someone who'd get very attached to their love interest; thus making her very defensive of said interest, and it would likely cloud her judgment towards matters such as these.
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He could, but he's pushing it with two. I don't plan on making a harem fic, two's plenty.
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I'm actually approaching the Fluttershy bit in the coming chapters.
I hope you enjoy it!
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Oh my.
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Yes; more chapters are in the works right now, real life is getting in the way of writing though, so it may be a while before I complete the next chapter.
1806396 Np with a story this good i can wait
Vinyl need's more action in there
More please
MOAR PLEASE
1763053 I agree with "_Mckay" Once you get used to it, it seems cool and dynamic . Although, you might want to title/declare POV switches in the future, cause others obviously seem to have issues following some of it.
Great scene once again But I thought for sure Vinyl was going to get sucked into this one Oh well, better luck next time. It was awesome none the less. It was very touching and well detailed. Also, gotta love that strong finish, if you know what I mean .
Really looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Just finished reading all the chapters, which I enjoyed immensely. This was how I felt when I realized I would now have to start waiting for new chapters to read:
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Anyways, great story! I especially like how the more sensitive/insecure side of RD is explored. Both clop chapters were good, I don't know why people thought the second was better, but I'm no clop connoisseur. Can't wait for moar!
I like this story because it has something I rarely see: a Vinyl Scratch and human pairing and this is the only one I've found with a story to it so over all I'm like this now I just need to find one with a Vinyl Scratch and human pairing that's just them... (Sigh) I can dream
Woo! Wall of text time!
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Haha, glad you like it!
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Hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long.
Glad you're enjoying it!
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Oh? And what thought was that?
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Hahaha; well, I hope one day to write clop on that same level. Glad you're enjoying the story so far!
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You'll be seeing more of Fluttershy and why she's like that pretty soon, I'd like to think.
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I'm glad you caught that, actually. Yes, she is an Earth pony; but I decided to make her a unicorn for this story.
I know it's not canon, but I figured what the hell. Hope it doesn't detract too much from the story for you!
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Soon.
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I'm writing more. Slowly.
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I haven't spilled too much as to whats going on with Scoots, but I do have plans to in the future.
She's not been forgotten, I promise.
As far as everyone in the story noticing Filthy over Scoots: Evidence to suggest that Scoots is abused has only just surfaced, while Filthy has been interfering with Rainbow for a while now.
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You'll see.
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Soon.
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Sometimes not even your dreams are safe.
The hulk will find you.
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Hahaha, glad you're enjoying it!
Still writing more, I promise!
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Oh my.
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Answers will come soon.
She's not a bitch for no reason.
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Hey thanks! Glad you're reading, and glad you're enjoying it!
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Hahaha, thanks!
I do have two stories planned for after this one is finished:
Anon x Rainbow Dash
Anon x Vinyl Scratch
Both straight ships, no third legs or anything like that.
I don't know how long it'll be before I get to those, as I'm already writing seven stories; and I'm not too sure how far away the end of this story is.
So much to write, so little time.
1909252 thank you! but if it's bad then well this will be an understatement. Have a nice day
Also may I just say DAT PROFILE PIC (bites lip)
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Seeing how that I'm now currently waiting for the newest chapter to be released.... I DO see.
This has to be the most well written fanfic I have ever read. thank you for writing this and I look forward to more
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Oh my
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Hulk smash!
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Those glasses would be the shit, yo.
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Brain talk is nice every now and again, but can get a little confusing. I'll do my best to keep it in check in the coming chapters.
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Haha, to be fair, that chapter was my first go at any clop ever.
I've been told the second clop chapter is far superior to the first.
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Well fuck.
Glad you're enjoying it, and I hope to have the next chapter out sometime soon!
I'm actually probably half-way through chapter fourteen as of right now. We'll see if I'm picking my old momentum or not I suppose.
It's stories like this that keep me from the X-box. Keep up the good work my friend!
i do hope vinyl gets back together with them and hopefully another steamy session with her too this time
Hey Nether, just curious, but did you have a boner while typing this?
Well, that was sexy. I was kind of hoping for a threesome...Oh well, you can't win 'em all. Great chapter!
damn was hoping for a threesome too >_<
oh well
I think it's kind of bullshit that a story with a three way romance, only has sex between two of them.... Buuuuuuuuuuullshit.