A fic based on the last two Pinkies watching paint dry: I thought the one on the left was the real one, but she got zapped 'back' into the pool. Was that the right choice?
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Xuncu
Regular at Ponybooru. Half-assed lazy artist, Brony of Science. Gamer. Dreamer. http://www.furaffinity.net/user/xuncu
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An idea I had to get out of my head. My first fic here, out of the some-millions of words I've read.
I was actually hoping someone would do this type of fic.
1632176 Damn it! Y'all beat me to writing something like this.
... Good job so far though. I would like to see more.
Pretty good. But I suggest you go through and proof read it again. There were a few missed letters.
Love it, had to fave
But Thorlol is right, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors.
Knew it was only a matter of time before someone wrote this one.
Short, but a very neat way of doing it. I'd like to see this expanded into a longer story, with more to each chapter.
Wow that was quick
86 word chapter? Using the "h" and "b" bbcode?
Ugh.
Short chapters are short.
I already knew this was going to happen right after I read the synopsis for this episode. xD And that was BEFORE season 3 even aired!
This is sooooo great! Man, I wish I had thought of this! I thought the one on the left was the real Pinkie too! Great job! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
DUN DUN DUNN!
Oooh, more!
1632922 1632952 Fixed
1633302 Yes, because how someone formats bold toooooooooooooooooootally can ruin a reading experience.
1633417 Granted, a bit of a cliche, any time there's a Dream machine/spell or spawned, personality-perfect clones. Sliders, Total Recall, Inuyasha, Gargoles, Inception, ect. With the only exception is when there's a tell that both the character and the audience test out.
Minna, miteite kure! I'll try to write longer chapters. They're short now because it's still just the day after, and it wouldn't take that long for 'wrong' things to be noticed (as well as swicthing between OG!Pinkie and Mirror!Pinkie). Hell, I was tempted to write something about Mirror!Pinkie eventually getting ill due to left-handed/right-handed amino acids, but don't think I can work something so technical into a story.
I totally knew someone would make a fic about it.
1633712 I never downvoted it. I'm just stating that it's generally not well liked to put anything but italics in story, with a few exceptions of the occasional bold.
This is really good so far. I like that you're following both the real Pinkie in the pool and the fake Pinkie taking her place.
make the chapters long but this story is interesting
Actually, Pinkie stepped through the mirror pool.
She's in the OTHER pinkie's world.
So if OUR pinkie got zapped, she's probably back where she belongs anyways.
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It's around the 5:40 marker.
1634392 Ah, but the one that came out of the pool had to be told the rest of the Mane 6's names. as well as the Pinkie Horde later.
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That would make sense if it wasn't clear that she was OUR pinkie.
She was also completing the poem as she came out of the other side.
Who's to say she didn't have a memory wipe?
1634535 Aha: other side of what? There was no hint of a parallel dimention, just magical contructs built around the image of a being in only one universe. And it was made pretty clear that both the 'origionals' and the copies spoke at the same time. Like I don't have chapters 1 and 3 be just chapters 2 and 4, with the words "right" and left" replaced with one another.
Think of like copying a received love letter, on a photocopier:
It will have the same words and penmanship, but it will lack things the origional will have, like weathering of the paper, or perfume sprayed on it.
And thusly, the copies of the copy will also lack that.
Thusly, all the copy!Pinkies, either the origional copy, or copies of copies, will be in all senses the same, but only the origional will have more, like the sorrow she did not feel when she was being copied, but only felt later, when she realized it got out of hand (which actually suggest that my fic is impossible, but whatevs).
Okeis everyone: you asked for it, so I'll take the extra time to make the remining chapters alot beefier (mayeb the current ones, too). I got my outline, and some clever ideas, so I hope you'll like 'em when I'm done. See you in a day or two!
Oh my gosh, PLEASE continue on with this! This is fantastic!
1634382 Actually, she stepped through it twice the first time to make one clones then a second time with the clones she made in the first place; so if you think about it that way, if Twilight acidentally sent Pinkie into the mirror pool she would be in the wring world having went back to her's the second time she went through the mirror pool (mind blowing, aint it?
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Hmmmm, Too many pinkie pies reminds me of a game..... oh yeah! PataPony!
here is a vid of it:
[youtube=8MpsNFvl6Us]
that and Awesome Story!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
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SWEET.
1632899 Me too!
Excellent picture, by the way. That's Sylvester MCoy, is it not?
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Indeed it is, Ace.
'Ere ya go: beefier chapters (3 and 4 upgraded), and a canon plothole filled. Next chapter will be at least a few days: gotta buld a table, and prolly get roped into cooking most of Thanksgiving dinner, then Chapter 6: Shattered
I'm going to track and hope it ends happy. Then I'm going to read it.
I'm surprised it wasn't this book:
i.imgur.com/iaQQg.jpg
1650371 Huh, what's that from?
Have mine eyes deceived me, or have I indeed just seen a reference to The Story of the Blanks?
On topic: Excellent! I know from first-hoof experience that trying to write a book-within-a-story is no walk in the park. One must completely disengage oneself from the piece-within-the-piece in order to write from the perspective of that other writer, and write such keeping in mind that the piece-within is written with a very different purpose than the story, but also one must keep it informative and relevant to the story. Something you've done perfectly!
Huh, so Equestria has it's own SCP Foundation.
I think you may have meant "entails" instead of "entrails" in the second paragraph of the book-within-a-book portion. Just a minor nitpick
1652299 *quick dictionary check* Ahh. Fixed.
im not familiar with this expression
1652475 I forgot to close the tag.
1652095 watch Gravity Falls
lol Gravity Falls
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Yay! Go Sylvester!
hahaha I see mirror world, after seeing that alt ending vid of the episode i was a tad worried.
Sounds really interesting. Sorry to hear that you won't be finishing it.
Dreadnought
8075785 Thankyou. Five years is a bit much, so just happened to recall making this, and wanted to at least let people know where I was going with it.
Still:
Could someone have Queeny Chryssi pick up that phone?
[youtube=HsqmU3v0hVA]
why is it that when I liked your stories, the number of likes remained the same?