It's gonna be weird. It's gonna be dark. It's not gonna have a happy ending.
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Mmmm...Makes me think of the dark future version of Twilight in pony POV.Except it's clop.
That was very well writen
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I can't understand the 4 dislikes. This was fantastic. !
And first Sombra ship fic goes toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo~
TWILIGHT SPARKLE!!!
Congrats Miss Sparkle, you have been shipped with every villian so far (even Flim&Flam though i hardly count them as true villians). How does that feel to have fans who love to pair you up with ponies and non-ponies who would probably hate your guts in canon?
TS: ......
I have to take a shower after reading that. god if it wasn't so well executed so professonially done so unmistakably amazing!! I would have down voted. Curse you and your mad writing skills! GOD I need a shower!
That was really good
too good...
*shudder*
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hey i did a sombra ship fic before!
god why do i read ones like this i know the endings will forever eat away at me seeing the person or in this case pony being broken in soul and body it hurts my heart but yet still i read it hopeing for a happy ending that never comes .
all in all the story was great
but of course it left me sad and forever wishing i could do something to safe her just like all those other storys iv read that are like this where hope is always out of grasp
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I know and i wrote a week ago a comment below it that i´m surprised there was an even earlier one than this one. XD
Its still in my "do read later"-list, just can´t find the time for it. :/
...uh fuck....
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Yes, exactly.
Crystals?
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I read that in Julie Andrews' singing voice
well..damn that ending..your story is very well written and interesting though. I like how you were very descriptive, your writing style I mean. (<-- eh..me rambling..) Anyway, very nice job.
I read this in morgan freemans voice
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I read that in this voice
Song fits perfectly
Everybody says they like this fanfic but in all honesty...lemme be real by asking a simple question...The FUCK did I just read?
Not that it isn't well written but legite...What sick force in this world compelled you to write this?!?!
4773327 I did it to see if I could.
Turns out I could.
4780332 LOVED IT!
This needs a prequel and a sequel.
...I don't get it.
...what the fuck did I just read??? it was good until the end!
I love the end of this story!
How can some don't get it? its evident! re-look at it again!
I feel so dirty for liking this
This was AMAZING. A ten out of ten for the depth of description in dark possession of the poor pony soul that was once Twilight Sparkle. Loved how she started to come partially out of it, then at the end, slips back into the dream that is King Sombra's control. Masterfully done!
I just... Wow. I wonder what happened to Twilight Sparkle, so I'm thinking that this needs a Prequel, and a sequel. I loved how she starts to slip out of it, and then almost instantly, she gets pulled back in.
Another thing I like, she calls out for Fluttershy to help her.
I LOVE that SO MUCH. After all, Fluttershy, though the least prone to violence, can fight really well when push comes to shove, and when it comes to her friends, both ponies and animals, she will protect them. And she's also the most compassionate out of the six, with rarity at a close second.
In general, this is a very well written copfic, and has a decent story behind it too!
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Ponies with mind control and their sane minds broken
Their small lives are worth, merely a token
Watch as they bow to their dark new king
These are a few of my favorite things
Ponies with shadows
And nightmarish whispers
Stealing their souls, til they succumb to thee accusers
Now, my crystal ponies a slave to their dreams
These are a few of my favorite things
(Can you finish the song?)
Hello! Have a review. This courtesy note is very late, for which the blame goes partly to Covid and partly to me. I was very wary of reading anything with the [Non-con] tag, but this is the kind of fic I want to see it used on. A very, very uncomfortable read, which stopped me liking it as much as some others did but which probably says it succeeded on its own terms. I doubt I'll want to read this again, but it's certainly worth a like.