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Your rhyme and rhythm was great until the end. Then the flow just hit a wall. 4/5.
2438720 *poke* Dare you to do better.
2438730
Sorry. I still need to collect some more AC/DC and Metallica jokes.
*faps furiously to a vague idea
2438753
Will your story involve dirty deeds being done dirt cheap? Or does nothing else matter?
The last line, which I can only assume was meant to be funny, only kinda rhymes, and therefore fails at both goals.
2439075 Naw, it'll probably involve assault and battery, or perhaps being thunderstruck.
totallynotabrony´s poems are the best xD