how has no one commented on this its got a great start

Woah... I like it. Nuff said.

"We killed our mother.." this same mother that's been trying to kill us and every other species like so many flies? Yeah I think I can live with that.

Stupid dreamers.
You could've fixed everything with just providing power, but you had to be a dumbass.

Hey, hey, hey! Don't step in mah shed! Jk, I like the start. It could use some more spacing between paragraphs and stuff, but other than that, it's fine. I hereby dub shameless self promotion a success!