Kirby's Nightmare in Equestria
Arrival
The air was still. No sound could be heard... other than the snores of a certain pink creature. The world around him was glittered with the stars in space illuminating the air around him.
Kirby lay in his star ship as it slowly drifted through space, no certain destination highlighted. Kirby had been through many adventures in his life, yet he was still shrouded in mystery. Nobody had known where he had come from or what he was. He was an enigma. All he had to do now, was to rest in his ship until something happened.
Apparently, that time was now.
Out of the quietness of the air, a loud bleep from the ship's alarm sounded. Kirby awoke in an instant, confused by the sudden lack of silence. He had heard the alarm before. Last time, he landed in Dreamland. Something's gonna happen. Kirby looked at the controls as they blinked in unison with the alarm.
On the screen read the word: "WARP"
Suddenly, a sheet of yellow metal began to obstruct his vision as it began to cover the spherical glass used to see.
The ship began to kick into action as it suddenly accelerated rapidly. The ship was surrounded by a exuberant myriad of colors in the shape of a tunnel as the ship continued to propel itself through.
The ship began to slow as it exited the tunnel. The bright yellow cover began to recede as the world around Kirby was revealed. Directly ahead of him stood a spherical planet, bright in color. Kirby was elated to see that he was about to land in a new world. It was about time for fun.
Kirby's starship slowly drifted towards the new planet with adventures ahead.
The Equestrian sun shone above as the day progressed through to the evening. Twilight paced through the library as she checked most of the items off of her daily checklist. She had cleared next to everything on her list. She went to the grocery, watched over the library all day, and she sent her previous friendship letter to Celestia. Only one thing was left on her list.
Stargazing with friends.
She looked towards the clock before realizing that it was almost time to get going or else she'd be LATE. Being late was never one of her favorite things.
"SPIKE! I need you to get my telescope, a blanket, and my picnic basket! It's almost time to get going!" yelled Twilight as she proceeded to grab a scarf and saddlebag from the hanger by the door.
"Yeah, yeah. I got it all right here!" Spike wobbled down the stairs, holding all of the required items in hand. He was just glad that he didn't have to come. A nap was needed immediately.
"Thanks Spike! I'll see you later." Twilight then proceeded to place most of the items in her saddlebag before sticking the handle to the basket in her mouth. She then rushed out the door at full speed, wanting to get there on time.
The world around her dimmed as the sun began setting over the horizon, revealing Luna's beautiful night. Twilight rushed through the semi-filled streets of Ponyville, as ponies began to file into their houses, ready to rest for the next day.
The trot to the resting spot was rather quick as Twilight rested down in the top of a hill outside Ponyville. She proceeded to place her basket on the ground before lying a blanket on the soft grass. She quickly placed her telescope beside the blanket before resting on the blanket.
After a few minutes, Twilight's friends began to arrive. Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, And Twilight sat around on the blanket, enjoying the daisy sandwiches. Rainbow Dash, of course, was bored and flying around doing tricks.
"Okay everypony, it's time to start! The sky is perfectly clear!" Twilight was beaming with excitement. She had been looking forward to stargazing with her best friends! She could show them, and lecture them, and call them George-... Okay, maybe not that, "I'll use the telescope first so you know how to use it, okay?"
Everypony present nodded in agreement before Twilight adjusted the telescope into view, hoping to find any constellations Luna could have made. A few minutes passed, nopony made a peep.
Applejack took a cookie in hoof before looking up to the sky, " Twi, is there suppose' ta be a meteor thingamajig tonight?"
Twilight turned her head away from the telescope towards Applejack in confusion, "Not that I know of Applejack. I'm sure I did my research before-hoof." Twilight then returned to the telescope, trying to find something.
"Then what's that there flyin' light?"
Twilight responded by looking away from the telescope and in the direction of Applejack's pointing hoof. In the sky, there was indeed a falling light. It seemed to move slowly, but got bigger in size.
It then struck her like a tons of bricks.
'It's getting closer!'
"EVERYPONY DUCK!"
The mares quickly jumped to the ground before a star-like ship passed overhead, a few meters above their heads. It sped down the hill at an angle, scraping against the hill and leaving a dirt trail behind. The UFO slowly began to roll before coming to a stop.
Everypony was petrified in place by fear, unsure of what to do.
The ship just sat at the bottom of the hill. The engine stopped humming as the ship died down. Kirby's star ship had dents littering the surface of the yellow metal-like material. Kirby sat with his eyes closed. He had been knocked unconscious in the impact.
The world was still for a few moments before Twilight slowly rose to her hooves.
'I'm not sure what that is. I'll have to make sure it's nothing dangerous.'
Before anypony else could do anything Twilight began trotting down the hill at full speed. She didn't care if she would fall, she had too many questions that needed an answer.
Twilight had reached the bottom of the hill before running to inspect the ship. It was shaped like a star and made with a hard, yellow material that she was unfamiliar of. The UFO had a semi-spherical glass-like substance on top of the start. Inside the ship was many buttons and levers that had an unknown purpose.
Twilight noticed a pink object hidden behind what seemed like a seat. She quickly ran around towards the front of the ship before looking inside.
Twilight froze.
A/N:
I apologize for being so inactive lately. I got hit by a case of writers block, even though I had the old story planned out. I just wrote this to get me feel like writing again
P.S. I apparently spelled thingamajig right.
P.P.S. I'm not expecting this to be any good XD
Kirby, Right back at Ya?
KNFSIDGJKAS
I LOVE THAT SHOW!!
What are you talking about this will be great
I'm liking the premise here. This takes place after Right Back at Ya correct? Then your going to need some new powers or some rehashes on the old favorites. May I suggest a few? Conveniently listed around certain Elements of Harmony. For your perusal.
Magic: Beam, Magic, Laser, Mirror, & FLARE BEAM
Honesty: Whip, Fighter, Stone, Hammer, Leaf, & GRAND HAMMER
Kindness: Animal, Parasol, Needle, Ice, Cupid, & SNOW BOWL
Loyalty: Wing, Tornado, Cutter, Wheel, & Jet. (Rainbow doesn't get a super ability. Because her focus is on speed not strength.)
Generosity: Sword, Water, Clean*, Hi-Jump, & ULTRA SWORD
Laughter: Yo-Yo, Bomb, Ninja, Balloon, Fire, & MONSTER FLAME! (Picked a bunch of random skills for Pinkie because come on... It's Pinkie. Though the Yo-Yo one had to be there...)
(Also including a handy link to check out the powers and much more.)
http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_copy_abilities#Exclusive_Copy_Abilities_.28Kirby:_Right_Back_at_Ya.21.29
I really appreciate the feed-back so far guys! I'm glad to see that people still remember that show, because it is my childhood.
I've also got a nice plan for things to happen between Kirby... my only conflict is how I'm supposed to type "poyo" because I'm not exactly sure how that's supposed to be like
I spotted the Looney Tunes reference in the chapter. Good on ya
Kirby sees something new: "Oh boy! Time for more fun!"
Twilight sees something new: "Everypony stay back! It could be dangerous!"
Goddamn ponies.
This is looking out to be great. If I knew anything about the show, I'm sure I would enjoy it ten times more.
Seriously though: Good start. I'm not gonna say 'I demand moar' because in my experience, that just puts pressure on the writer. But I'll admit I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
Thumbs up for doing what I should be doing! (writing)
1571044 I'm glad about that. I thought this would be totally hated for being bad or something.
P.S. Watch the show... seriously... it's one of the main reasons my profile pic is that...
1571055 Puts pressure? Hell, it makes me try harder!
1571071 Well than.
GIVE ME MOAR.
1571088 I actually had this as a separate tab for a week because I couldn't bring myself to finish it. Luckily, after I submitted it, I read over it before realizing it wasn't too bad. I'm still having trouble processing that I actually wrote it
I also am REALLY looking forward to the things Kirby will do, because they were hilariously amazing in the show, and my old story doesn't motivate me as much as this one does.
Being a massive Kirby fan, I love you for this. Thank you so much!
Woohoo! Kirby!
1570592 I watched It in Japanese.
1570696 For Pinkie? Party bomb!
Yay! More massive Kirby fans!
first off:theme songs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=veeFQXWzLKA
or this one:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x1M7kJASyoQ
second of all: Kirby!!!! how could i not think of this crossover good thinking
ALL OF MY YES!
Very , Very interesting start.
By the way, if you manage to spot any grammatical errors, tell me. I don't like having bad grammar.
Since we don't have Right Back At Ya! in my country, I watched the Japanese version. Which I recommend actually, it has a lot of cut content and better voice acting.
On another note, if you don't make this work I will kill you. You can't possibly fail, this is too awesome a concept to ruin. But this could be the start of something totally awesome, so do it justice!
1573552 Sir, yes, sir!
I want to make this work as much as the next guy, believe me.
1573698 encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTynnG_SNVn_KoHyuewRh-7faIE59In6Vv-USOzQv6mT0GinDc7kg please more
1573845 Not if I die from kitty-induced diabeetus first.
Coolio! #14 on what's hot, 31:0 like to dislike... That means I actually did something right!
imageshack.us/a/img33/5764/likethischapter.jpg and just like it was your childhood it is also mine, and gosh dang i love that show
yay! HURRY UP
1576156 Okie-Dokie-Lokie! I mean, it's not like I'm typing the next chapter right now or something...
C'mon man! Write this thing!
...I mean, If that's all right with you.
But, seriously. This story is great. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
1576188 Will do, sir.
P.S. You're the 999th person to view one of my stories
Heyoooo munomana YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON EVER to think of a crossover with kirby!
Kirby is soooo awsome, let us all bow down to kirby and munomana for giving us this fic.
Kirby may be an enigma, but he's predictiable once you get to know him.
He's also the equivalent of a toddler, has an interest in anything he hasn't seen before, has a short attention span, and has been shown to speak in english once or twice. However, he's only called out two names in the anime.
Bun
and Meta Knight(Which he pronounced as "Meh-Na", it was adorable.
1579413 I know, that's how I'm gonna write him XD
I mean you only know his personality... I've watched that all through my childhood
1580809 Go ahead and do it! I'm not holding you back.
btw. He's not gonna be controlled around. I'll just be going to his POV every now and then where he will be in control of himself. He'll be in his own control for the majority of the fic.
Kinda had a derp there.(no offense Derpy) also, Haaaaiiiiiiiiii!
1570732 P.S. Do like the Kirby do! Poyo! Poyoo! Right back at'cha, yeah.
Also, unless necessary please don't go the cliche King DDD +(INSERTNAMEHERE) follows kirby there. because that would dampen the experience if not done EXTREMELY well.
A kirby crossover?
...
Wait your serious arent you?
Oh my...
Goodbye. *vanishes*
You should really include pics in your fics when you can or at least links. like this
*reads first part* Nobody knows what he is or where he came from? Bullcrap! He's a Star Warrior from the planet Pop Star!
I don't get it...
Very nice story can't wait to read the rest.
was that a reference to something? it feels like a reference to something!
2017788
You're right!
I think it went something like this
I can hug him, and squeeze him, and call him George.
I will love him and squeeze I'm and call him George! I get they reference! Plus this is good!
Does anypony else see a Pinkie Pie and Kirby team up?
2017788 Yeah... a PBS Kids show I was somehow roped into watching once, it was called... cyber something. Wait! I know... Cyberchase, that's it! I despise that show
1742625 hes a star warrior somewhere in space he was born BOOM MIND BLOWN
1570592
Me too! It was so funny and action packed!!!
I litterally came here to look up Kirby in Equestria and I'm already loving this, I usually don't choose the first result but I'm glad I did.
Oh btw I'm in a Kirby mood since I was watching some old Game Grumps vids when Jontron was still around and they play Kirby: Super Star
Ahh yes Kirby Right Back at Ya, the show happened to be a big part of my childhood as well. If I were to pick my favorite Nintendo character it would be by far Kirby, I mean how can you NOT love him? He's literally an 8 inch pink puffball that only says "POYO!" and is so strong that he was able to throw a monster, on a frying pan, ORBIT THE SUN and return with a cooked monster.
~ Nito First of The Dead