Very few ponies know of the times before Discord's rule as lord of Equestria. this true account was created for the sole purpose of learning the truth of what happened all those thousands of years ago.
just want to read lots of stories and possibly write a few of my own if i feel like it.
Very few ponies know of the times before Discord's rule as lord of Equestria. this true account was created for the sole purpose of learning the truth of what happened all those thousands of years ago.
Well, no one commented, might as well comment, with stuff, and faces... Anyway, moving on...
The story itself seems okay, not super cliche, text could be spaced out more, grammar seemed okay, overall not bad, tad confusing though. But that's probably just me, I'm quite tired.
That plus human tag? Seems like something I'm putting in my story
Also it's best if you put authors notes in the comments section. And you don't need to put in who owns the characters etc.
Overall, good. Keep writing.
This story is promising. I hope you update the story, unlike some authors...
I agree with 1519560
Awesome line there, the human tag really gets my hopes up!
1519560 I'm not changing the disclaimer, it's what i do. As for the author's note, i find many people don't read the comments but don't worry i try to keep them short.
1520156 I may not be the quickest author to update, but i do try to get a chapter up at least once a week. Maybe more if i'm not buried in schoolwork.
Thanks to both of you for the Comments. I appreciate it.
1521045 No problem, will be following this story
'Quicksilver'
Lawl
1678134 I knew you'd like it
I must say, I am very intrigued by this story, I will definitely be following it
1703986 I see you in those bushes over there story should continue soon